All Comments on 'I Never'

I say continue to write erotic stories. This was a damn fine start.

I loved your story. Keep it up, the writing that is, and I'll keep it up by reading the stories.

Very nice story. It could use more description as you write of the various action going on. Keep writing.

Good first story liked the honesty ...appeared to be true and jsut enough to be erotic..always love couple to couple stories reembered my first time...now explore the rest of your wild fantasies or invite me to join u

Your story was written so it almost seamed like I was watching and not just reading. Take care!