All Comments on 'Harri'

by Dotrice1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Wonderful

Excellent story. I like very much how you took your time to develope the characters and the plot before getting them together. The emotional amazement of the lead character that she was attracted to this other woman was great and added some lovely suspense to the story. Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Top Effort

Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Crew CutCrew Cutover 20 years ago
Hot

I can't resist a great butch character. More please!

tinman69stinman69sabout 20 years ago
Great story lady!

This just had to follow the other story "After School" Good writing! Great story! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Tingling all over

Both of us are tingling all over and we do hope you continue with this story. Bring the other partner into your scene and have a mini orgy.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU, go girls, go...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Real believable

One of the most believable stories on here

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