by LadyJane
Lady Jane you have done it again an excellent story, Thank you
Ourkidone
write more femdom!!!, and make sure they eat the creampies!
THE STORY WAS GOOD UNTILL THE ESCAPE I FIGURE THERE BE MORE TO HER ESCAPE AND INTRODUCTION TO SISTER TO HER BROTHERS BUT OTHER THAN THAT i DONT SEE MUCH WRONG WITH IT
What a remarkable end or is it? I would have expected nothing less from the lady. Perhaps in a spare moment sometime in the future these two will have more adventures. A costume ball, an encounter on a vacant road who knows;-) Great job good characters
This was a GREAT storie you should realy write more stories and maybe even publish it in a book 8)
wiccan/pegan grl
Lady Jane i am so glad to have found your stories. I was glued to the pages and wanting more. Please keep writing and put out a book. I know it would be a bestseller!
thanks,
sweetbeauty
Awesome story! I can not wait for the next chapter. Please say there will be more. Your characters are wonderful and sexy! Although not quite sure about Elizabeth,but her husband sounds so sexy!And Catalina what a high spirited wench no wonder he wanted her so desperately. Looking forward to the next experience of Catalina.Maybe she will meet a wealthy lord again.......
Your story was amazing from start to end, I love to dabble in writing and find your story so inspiring.
It was hot lusty and tantalizing all the way through although I do hope for more adventures of "wild cat"
Absolutely loved the story. Your words that described what Catalina went through had me wanting to read more about her, I could feel & see all she endured and you could tell that,that gave Catalina an inner strength and determination to find her family. Great story! GREAT! You should go further with your writing.
It's 3 am. I have just finished the series, and what a series it is!!! There should be more like this one, Bravo!
totally agree
great read
perfect ending
.... or start to another chapter????
:)
Sort of like the Angelina series of the past - I believe I got it correct, but does not really matter - since the lust and sexual escapades are much better here in the present than just alluding to what the series of old revealed.
I hope you write more and if so, please let me know as a long novel or series would be appreciated!
Catalina was treated very badly, but at least it ended happily for her!