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Aaaaaagggggaaaahhhhhh!
Just as the story heats up to the boiling point, Bam, a cliffhanger ending! Vixen's watched "Dallas" reruns way too often!
Ok, rant over. I'm eagerly awaiting the implied sequel(s).
:-)
Good Job Vixy
Very nice first submission. Can't wait to read more.
Frustrating!
You picked just the right and wrong point to stop. Right because there was no better point for a tension grabber. In the begining of sex, so you're already hooked! Wrong because I want to know what the rest of the story is!!!!!!!
Impatiently waiting!
Heys guys dont be so impatient
Men! Look at those comments you're all wanting fuck, fuck, fuck. This had a 'Romance' title and that's basically what you got. I loved it and in fact lived it! How many times have you missed the alarm and then dived into your clothes without thinking, - of course not expecting that you might get the loving of your life post lunch.
But I WILL try to remember, if I wear any that is, to put on matching bra's and knickers every day. You just never know!
Very good
A very good start!
nice work vic!
an ok story...at least lt made me cun
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