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Bad Day Gone Explicit

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by Anonymous01/22/04

Aaaaaagggggaaaahhhhhh!

Just as the story heats up to the boiling point, Bam, a cliffhanger ending! Vixen's watched "Dallas" reruns way too often!
Ok, rant over. I'm eagerly awaiting the implied sequel(s).
:-)

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Good Job Vixy

Very nice first submission. Can't wait to read more.

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by Anonymous01/23/04

Frustrating!

You picked just the right and wrong point to stop. Right because there was no better point for a tension grabber. In the begining of sex, so you're already hooked! Wrong because I want to know what the rest of the story is!!!!!!!
Impatiently waiting!

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by Anonymous02/02/04

Heys guys dont be so impatient

Men! Look at those comments you're all wanting fuck, fuck, fuck. This had a 'Romance' title and that's basically what you got. I loved it and in fact lived it! How many times have you missed the alarm and then dived into your clothes without thinking, - of course not expecting that you might get the loving of your life post lunch.
But I WILL try to remember, if I wear any that is, to put on matching bra's and knickers every day. You just never know!

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by Anonymous08/30/05

Very good

A very good start!

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by Anonymous11/04/06

nice work vic!

an ok story...at least lt made me cun

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