All Comments on 'Taste of Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice plot

Great story - started slow - then went into fast mode.

Mom and son got it on a little to soon after a slow start and easy first contact together.

Would have given a 100% if sex had been drawn out into another chapter.

Great reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Need an editor

It seems obvious English is not your first language - and that's fine, but you need an editor. This was an 'OK' story that could have been exceptional with the help of a good editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good times

i got my step mom knocked up she had child dad is so stupid he works all day i work on her were toghter all the time i get jealous when he fucks her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
it was a good story

I liked it a lot, but there needed to be more adjectives. Like wet, tight, & big. Also she should call her son by his name. Not "son" Other than that it was a good story.

peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
home schooled

great story, well written, good build up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
poor writing

Learn proper writing, proofread what you've written then try again.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
What about a part 2 ??

Comments are to be taken lightly, don't let them stop you from finishing this story. If you quit now , they have beat you. It was a good read with a few errors . thanks

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