All Comments on 'The Girl Who Gets What She Wants'

A great story. One thought, though. It really is enough for 2 or maybe even 3 separate chapters. A bit much sex for one sitting. Not complaining, just saying.

ASStastic!!

Loved every bit of it and hope you'll follow up with a few more chapters.

Loved this story I am looking forward to seeing what else you will write

Story started out very well with the two ladies talking before Ryan came home, but then the descriptions of the sex became formulaic - actually became a bit boring. Also there were several glitches with antecedents agreements - reference was actually to Sarah when it should have been Katrina and vice-versa. Despite those problems, however, I did rate it a 5. And, as was said earlier, it might have been better broken up into two or three chapters.

Please continue writing, you either have a vivid imagination or you are living the dream....or both! Great story thanks

Great story as well as satisfying and nicely written, read this one and was very happy when I realised there was a sequal so read that straight away! Looking forward to the story continuing.

I would do anything to have that shower at my place! Fantastic read and love the ending, bringing the story back to the game. Very arousing descriptors. The author has a good grasp on girl-on-girl action. Very captivating story and like the real estate details throughout to bring the story back to the main character.