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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
And....?

This story is great as far as it goes but the ending is too obscure to he of any interest. Remember your readers are not inside your head and may not understand the intricacies of your own imagination.

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French expatriate working in Asia, primarily India and Vietnam, with an ache for sexual adventure and in constant search of love.