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I Like Your Eyes Wide Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/23/15

More please.

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by visioneer11/23/15

I_Am_Yours - you write with depth and skill and have launched a thoughtful, quietly intense D/s story. Your lead character is complex, interesting, and boldly curious without being naive. I hope you have more of this story to share.

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by Anonymous11/23/15

Awesome!

Can't wait to read more!

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by Anonymous11/24/15

Absolutely delicious...

I sincerely hope you will continue with this. Very well written and the storyline looks promising!

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by justahole11/24/15

Wonderful

Beautifully written and incredibly erotic.

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by Anonymous11/24/15

More please!

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by kaleesi11/24/15

Love love love this story! Please continue!

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by Anonymous11/24/15

Amazing!!!

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by subnotslave11/24/15

Oh my...

I think that was the best first chapter I've read in a while. It captured my interest and imagination from the start. Beautifully written, it was erotic and HOT! My only complaint is that it was too short. Looking forward to more soon please.
Jules.

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by Anonymous11/25/15

Excellent!

Oh hells yes. Nailed it. Great vocabulary. Great set up. Great intimacy. Please say there will be a gag in her future soon! Don't make us beg. Then again...

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by Anonymous11/27/15

perfection

Love the way you write. No need to change a thing. Can we have her call him master?

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by Gouldigger11/30/15

Did you just...

Cause I mean this character you've written is living the moments I've wanted to experience. It's like you took my deepest fantasies and put them into a beautifully written story....

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by HaydenDLinder05/15/16

That's it!?

I hate you! I hate you! I hate you!

I gave it 5 stars because it was perfect.

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