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Lion's Pride Inn Ch. 02

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by Anonymous11/25/15

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Could really use some editing magic, but other than that, you've got an excellent base to write a very nice story on. Keep working at it, and maybe seek out someone wIlling to help you write a little better. Keep up the good work.

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