All Comments on 'Big Dick Fucks Blonde Girlfriend Pt. 01'

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donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 8 years ago
What a great start!

You're a terrific writer; please keep going.

You were wise to post it here, rather than in Loving Wives, so at least you won't get flamed by the "'Loving' means what I say it means" jackbooted thugs who "police" LW for cuckold stories.

You'll still get flames from the even-dumber commenters who treat each piece of fiction as if it is a Dr. Phil case study. They'll tell you what they think about the wisdom and morals of your fictional characters as if you were describing real people -- real people who wanted their opinions.

I can't wait for this to continue. Glance at my stories

[https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions]

and you'll soon see what floats my boat (really a small dinghy....) But these are your characters and you take them wherever YOU want....

DonaldElliott11

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Was he really that stupid?

When your characters have the IQ of rocks, your story sinks into the mud. UGH!

TwilekloverTwilekloverover 8 years ago
Keep going!

Its a great beginning and I really want to hear more! You have a wonderful conversation-style of writing and it really helps me empathize with the character. Please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Mooooorrree!!!

Moremoremoremoremore

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

Great start!!! Can't wait to read more. Ignore the idiots.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thanks for sharing

Thanks for sharing man. Its really brave of you. You might not be that big, but it sounds like you have a brain. Use that brain to get you somewhere. "Fuck bitches, get money" as they say. Keep you head up. Both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
My super hot slutty British blonde bimbo

Ex gf basically told me the same thing and was always flirty and slutty acting anyway but I would get sooo turned on by the thought of her getting nailed by a really tall big ha Diane guy a d then I could mane out with her after he came in her mouth! Mmm yummm ... Well it happens we skit and I LOVED it case in her little slutts check bit now! ;(

DavieFessesDavieFessesabout 8 years ago
Please, continue!

I need to hear more!

duke9555duke9555about 7 years ago
Too short

no pun intended

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

My wife waited untill we were married to tell me she needed more. I cried then called by neighbor and asked him to please come over and please my wife. 4yourpleasureiam

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