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Anonymous11/24/15
Was he really that stupid?
When your characters have the IQ of rocks, your story sinks into the mud. UGH!
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Thanks for sharing
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My super hot slutty British blonde bimbo
Ex gf basically told me the same thing and was always flirty and slutty acting anyway but I would get sooo turned on by the thought of her getting nailed by a really tall big ha Diane guy a d then I could mane out with her after he came in her mouth! Mmm yummm ... Well it happens we skit and I LOVED it case in her little slutts check bit now! ;(
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What a great start!
You're a terrific writer; please keep going.
You were wise to post it here, rather than in Loving Wives, so at least you won't get flamed by the "'Loving' means what I say it means" jackbooted thugs who "police" LW for cuckold stories.
You'll still get flames from the even-dumber commenters who treat each piece of fiction as if it is a Dr. Phil case study. They'll tell you what they think about the wisdom and morals of your fictional characters as if you were describing real people -- real people who wanted their opinions.
I can't wait for this to continue. Glance at my stories
[https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.ph p?uid=789392&page=submissions]
and you'll soon see what floats my boat (really a small dinghy....) But these are your characters and you take them wherever YOU want....
DonaldElliott11
Was he really that stupid?
When your characters have the IQ of rocks, your story sinks into the mud. UGH!
Keep going!
Its a great beginning and I really want to hear more! You have a wonderful conversation-style of writing and it really helps me empathize with the character. Please keep going!
Mooooorrree!!!
Moremoremoremoremore
Awesome
Great start!!! Can't wait to read more. Ignore the idiots.
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing man. Its really brave of you. You might not be that big, but it sounds like you have a brain. Use that brain to get you somewhere. "Fuck bitches, get money" as they say. Keep you head up. Both of them.
My super hot slutty British blonde bimbo
Ex gf basically told me the same thing and was always flirty and slutty acting anyway but I would get sooo turned on by the thought of her getting nailed by a really tall big ha Diane guy a d then I could mane out with her after he came in her mouth! Mmm yummm ... Well it happens we skit and I LOVED it case in her little slutts check bit now! ;(
Please, continue!
I need to hear more!
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