The names and details of the characters sound familiar, can't remember where I read about them though. I feel like I'm in the "Bizarro Jerry" episode of Seinfeld, and I've just run into Kevin and Feldman, from across the hall, and we're all going to eat at Reggie's. Hopefully someone gets that reference.
But I honestly take no offense, I'm flattered if I provided some inspiration, if only for the names.
have described a loser quite well obviously self respect is a thing long gone. TK
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Anonymous12/03/15
Hilarious comment annon
"Tell it to someone that can write." That's the funniest comment I've ever read. Good advice though. Awful, awful writing. Is this supposed to be a play? Why are the character's names at the beginning of every sentence? Dreadful.
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Anonymous12/03/15
Dude... under-ware?
How is it you cucks can be so boring and so dumb at the same time?
Jesus... addicted to his cock, touches her in places he can't, it's just sex? Nothing changes with you guys, does it? You just grind out the same crap over and over again and screw any originality.
Then again I guess it's hard to type with just one hand which is probably the only reason this piece of garbage was ever written.
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Anonymous12/03/15
bullshit
This is bullshit and the reasoning is stupid. The weaker man should eleminate himself from the human race. I have a large penis and this should not give me the right to mate with women of smaller men. Actually, most women are not size queens and they enjoy an average size penis. There were many times that I was turned down for sex due to the size of my dick. Also, a big dick does not always equal excellent sex. I give this story 1*.
This is a nonsense comedy: 1st - The wife cheats all her married life, thinking the husband isn't aware of it, got pregnat by the lover and then when the husband say "blowjob" she says: "Don't use that word. It's crude and it makes me feel so cheap..."? How could she feel cheaper than she already is? 2nd - the husband married and stayed married to a whore, even supported another man's children, for 15 years, just for a lousy blowjob? 1*
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Anonymous12/03/15
Me: "That is not the way to write dialogue!"
You also mix 'their' and 'they're'. The first sentence isn't a sentence. Did you ever attend an English class in school?
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Anonymous12/03/15
Just like the last story following this same storyline less than two weeks ago....
....you just dove in and insulted every reader in this forum.
I ask you, what male ego takes that kind of betrayal and even enables it year after year, without eventually taking some kind of preemptive or rejoinder action? Hell, he could have fucked Liz out on the boat after telling her what Chris and wifey had been doing all these years. Anything, ANYTHING would have been more believable than this sorry tale.
I don't believe a word of you assertion that this was true and told by the cuck.
I think it was a loose and poorly conceived story idea you couched that way to try and garner some unearned interest.
Oh, and try putting some effort into your spelling and grammar. Your silly, obvious and too frequent mistakes make the prime case for honest editorial effort.
Besides, there will be another football game on in 20 minutes and my beer-fries are almost ready.
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Anonymous12/03/15
There are some really demented lifestyles out there.
You have my sympathy, and contempt.
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Anonymous12/03/15
Strange Story
In addition to the other problems already mentioned by others, I guess we're suppose to accept that Liz either doesn't care that her husband Chris is fucking someone else or more incredibly that she doesn't know.
I'm not a massive fan of this style of narration, it's too much like a script for a stage play. It doesn't work for me, sorry.
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Anonymous12/03/15
rubbish
weak as not worth a read
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Anonymous12/03/15
Husband needs to get a divorce and never remarry.
What a spineless wimp. What kind of guy stays with a roommate that's always rubbing his dick size in his face? And he starts from the very beginning to set his wife up as his rommates slut? And he knows that the kids aren't his? What is stopping him from divorcing the slut, suing his "friend" for destroying their marriage and fathering the kids? He could get a lot of money and be able to move away and start his life over. Poorly written drivel. The story was badly laid out, the husbands actions are without rhyme or reason, his wife hardly seems upset or guilty about her wholesale cheating so why stick around? The dialogue must have been written by a 12 year old. And drop the "it's a true story" crap. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. Telling us that this is true just makes us laugh at you. Except maybe those cunts Bonnie and Vastie. Those two brainless cows love everything. Bad story, poor writing, terrible conclusion equals 1 star. And you only get that because negative stars aren't yet available.
The husbands doesn't seem to realize that his own behaviour is the most unnatural of all.
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Anonymous12/03/15
Author' Note: I'm an idiot
for publishing this nonsense!
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Anonymous12/03/15
Wow, a lot of trouble...
so you don't admit you're gay. That's where the self-hate and self-degradation come from. You know the truth, and ironically, so does everyone else. That you don't want to admit it openly doesn't change the perceptions of everyone else. In fact, going through these mental hurdles makes it pretty obvious to everyone.
Self-delusion is psychically traumatic, no matter how well-crafted the delusion is, and you're not going to be happy or well-adjusted until you discard the delusion and admit, at least to yourself, your true feelings. Come out of the closet, so you can finally live your life honestly...
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Anonymous12/03/15
Only gay fockers write this kind od story!
You see, a straight laced guy would NEVER write such garbage. Gay focker!
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Anonymous12/03/15
If it's true and the cuck let it happen then why the divorce
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Anonymous12/04/15
re: anonymous-ASSHOLE of Lit......
Bonnie only an idiot like you would give a story like this a five star rating. Even kennyboy who's into cuckold tales didn't like it. That's very telling. Your flaming bonnie is immature and childish. Grow up. Gave it a one that's more than deserving.
I was talking with an older lady friend, and she said,
She said that it is impossible for a woman to sleep with an incredible lover and not bond with him. She said that as she looks back over the years and her many lovers, the ones she fell hard for very quickly were the ones who were incredible in bed. She said that they guys who were mediocre or lousy in bed, she did not bond with as quickly, or as strongly. She said that it took a while before she had enough experiences to look back on and see and recognize the pattern, but there it is. If you guys who like this think that your wife can fuck incredible lovers who are better in bed than you are, and not fall in love with them, you are out of your mind.
This is how it works. She loves you, but it is not the same as she loves her incredible lover. He is the one who makes her heart sing. He is the one she will daydream about. He is the one that makes her eyes light up when she sees an unexpected text from him. He is the one who make her heart do flip flops when she sees him. He is the one who makes her twirl her fingers through her hair while she is talking with him on the phone. He is the one that makes her want to smile so big it lights up a room.
See, women compare and contrast. They do this with everything. So when a new guy enters her life, she compares and contrasts him with her present guy. Now, when she is just dating, even if she has been dating the same guy for a long time, she will compare and contrast the new man to her present man, and if the new man is better, and wants her to be his, and he makes her feel secure in doing so, she will leave the first guy to be with the new guy. We've all been there. We've all had that happen to us, and some of us were at times, the new guy who she left another guy for.
Now, if she is married, then this is different. She may not leave for the new guy. She wants to, but it may not work for her. She might have kids and doesn't want to put them through a divorce. The new guy may not be nearly as wealthy even if he is superior in all other aspects. She may fear rejection by her family and friends. The new guy may be way too young, or way too old for her to consider him for marriage, even though he is superior in all other ways. She may feel obligated to her husband, such that she would feel guilty for leaving him. And finally, she may love her husband, but just not be IN LOVE with him, but the love is such that she feels safe and secure. The new guy may seem too good to be true, and so she fears he will eventually get bored with her and leave. So she will just ride out the affair as long as she can, and then find a new lover if possible.
The guy who encourages, and or, facilitates his wife having an affair is fooling himself that he has control. He may think that he is making things better for himself. He may think that he is securing his relationship with her. After all, if she has permission to fuck other guys, she doesn't need to leave him, right? The problem is, she is falling in love with these guys, no matter how much she denies it. When she says it's different, she really just means that she hasn't reached a point where she is comfortable leaving you for him. Eventually, she is going fall hard enough for one to the point that she is willing to leave you for him. It's a woman's natural instinct to want to be attached to the alpha. If she can't do that, then she wants to be with one near the top. If you understand that, women's actions and attitudes start making more sense. So make no mistake, if this guy you allow her to fuck, is a whole lot better in bed, is better looking, is taller, more athletic, etc... then you better believe that she fantasizes about being his wife. Something is making her ignore that, acting like an anchor, but just because it is like this now, doesn't mean it won't change. You have no idea what they say to each other when you aren't around. Or when they text each other. She can, after all, delete any text she doesn't want you to see...if she even lets you read them.
Bottom line is that this type of thing may be a fantasy, but you are literally playing with fire, and it is very likely that you will get burned. You can't rewrite the laws of nature. You are going to lose your wife if you do this. And even if she is still with you, it doesn't mean you haven't lost her.
Have to comment on Anon's comment (I was talking to an older lady friend)
That is really well written, cogent analysis of why I always felt that wife sharing/cuckoldry is a dangerous lifestyle. I am not talking about the one off situations on vacation, out of town etc but women who have regular FB's or boyfriends outside the marriage.
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Anonymous12/11/15
Tender Words
Nothing says "I love you" more tenderly to a loving wife than her cuckold's castration.
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Anonymous12/18/15
Right On Anon
Well said Anon (I was talking to an older lady friend). A woman who is "fucking" another guy with the husband or boy friend's consent isn't really In Love with the Hubby or BFriend. It is the difference between "I love you but am not In Love with you." Similar to a sister/brother relationship. To put it simply, without lustful passionate sex there is not relationship.
poster with title "bullshit" -- that must be the best post on this site! The admission that you've been turned down for sex because of being too big and that most women like it average size is quite a statement on Literotica where the assumption everywhere is that a penis can neither be too large nor too black and that to be a white average size guy is an invitation to be cuckolded. I've been longing for someone to actually give that point of view here.
You can find females writing elsewhere with your message -- eg on the Illicit Encounter website where the inevitable question of size came up -- and a couple of women said just what you've said here. But on Literotica? Never! Until now.
Next time he should tell it to someone who can write.
Agreed
Agreed with annon.
These names sound familiar
The names and details of the characters sound familiar, can't remember where I read about them though. I feel like I'm in the "Bizarro Jerry" episode of Seinfeld, and I've just run into Kevin and Feldman, from across the hall, and we're all going to eat at Reggie's. Hopefully someone gets that reference.
But I honestly take no offense, I'm flattered if I provided some inspiration, if only for the names.
U
have described a loser quite well obviously self respect is a thing long gone. TK
Hilarious comment annon
"Tell it to someone that can write." That's the funniest comment I've ever read. Good advice though. Awful, awful writing. Is this supposed to be a play? Why are the character's names at the beginning of every sentence? Dreadful.
Dude... under-ware?
How is it you cucks can be so boring and so dumb at the same time?
Jesus... addicted to his cock, touches her in places he can't, it's just sex? Nothing changes with you guys, does it? You just grind out the same crap over and over again and screw any originality.
Then again I guess it's hard to type with just one hand which is probably the only reason this piece of garbage was ever written.
bullshit
This is bullshit and the reasoning is stupid. The weaker man should eleminate himself from the human race. I have a large penis and this should not give me the right to mate with women of smaller men. Actually, most women are not size queens and they enjoy an average size penis. There were many times that I was turned down for sex due to the size of my dick. Also, a big dick does not always equal excellent sex. I give this story 1*.
This is a nonsense comedy...
This is a nonsense comedy: 1st - The wife cheats all her married life, thinking the husband isn't aware of it, got pregnat by the lover and then when the husband say "blowjob" she says: "Don't use that word. It's crude and it makes me feel so cheap..."? How could she feel cheaper than she already is? 2nd - the husband married and stayed married to a whore, even supported another man's children, for 15 years, just for a lousy blowjob? 1*
Me: "That is not the way to write dialogue!"
You also mix 'their' and 'they're'. The first sentence isn't a sentence. Did you ever attend an English class in school?
Just like the last story following this same storyline less than two weeks ago....
....you just dove in and insulted every reader in this forum.
I ask you, what male ego takes that kind of betrayal and even enables it year after year, without eventually taking some kind of preemptive or rejoinder action? Hell, he could have fucked Liz out on the boat after telling her what Chris and wifey had been doing all these years. Anything, ANYTHING would have been more believable than this sorry tale.
I don't believe a word of you assertion that this was true and told by the cuck.
I think it was a loose and poorly conceived story idea you couched that way to try and garner some unearned interest.
Oh, and try putting some effort into your spelling and grammar. Your silly, obvious and too frequent mistakes make the prime case for honest editorial effort.
Besides, there will be another football game on in 20 minutes and my beer-fries are almost ready.
There are some really demented lifestyles out there.
You have my sympathy, and contempt.
Strange Story
In addition to the other problems already mentioned by others, I guess we're suppose to accept that Liz either doesn't care that her husband Chris is fucking someone else or more incredibly that she doesn't know.
An old baboon is back...
and deserve a wonderful and resounding 1*
I'm not a massive fan of this style of narration, it's too much like a script for a stage play. It doesn't work for me, sorry.
rubbish
weak as not worth a read
Husband needs to get a divorce and never remarry.
What a spineless wimp. What kind of guy stays with a roommate that's always rubbing his dick size in his face? And he starts from the very beginning to set his wife up as his rommates slut? And he knows that the kids aren't his? What is stopping him from divorcing the slut, suing his "friend" for destroying their marriage and fathering the kids? He could get a lot of money and be able to move away and start his life over. Poorly written drivel. The story was badly laid out, the husbands actions are without rhyme or reason, his wife hardly seems upset or guilty about her wholesale cheating so why stick around? The dialogue must have been written by a 12 year old. And drop the "it's a true story" crap. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. Telling us that this is true just makes us laugh at you. Except maybe those cunts Bonnie and Vastie. Those two brainless cows love everything. Bad story, poor writing, terrible conclusion equals 1 star. And you only get that because negative stars aren't yet available.
Couldn't finish this pile of garbage
1* only because there's no minus 10
Pseudoscientific excuse
The husbands doesn't seem to realize that his own behaviour is the most unnatural of all.
Author' Note: I'm an idiot
for publishing this nonsense!
Wow, a lot of trouble...
so you don't admit you're gay. That's where the self-hate and self-degradation come from. You know the truth, and ironically, so does everyone else. That you don't want to admit it openly doesn't change the perceptions of everyone else. In fact, going through these mental hurdles makes it pretty obvious to everyone.
Self-delusion is psychically traumatic, no matter how well-crafted the delusion is, and you're not going to be happy or well-adjusted until you discard the delusion and admit, at least to yourself, your true feelings. Come out of the closet, so you can finally live your life honestly...
Only gay fockers write this kind od story!
You see, a straight laced guy would NEVER write such garbage. Gay focker!
If it's true and the cuck let it happen then why the divorce
re: anonymous-ASSHOLE of Lit......
Bonnie only an idiot like you would give a story like this a five star rating. Even kennyboy who's into cuckold tales didn't like it. That's very telling. Your flaming bonnie is immature and childish. Grow up. Gave it a one that's more than deserving.
Dreadful. Really dreadful
Not even going to give it 1*
I was talking with an older lady friend, and she said,
She said that it is impossible for a woman to sleep with an incredible lover and not bond with him. She said that as she looks back over the years and her many lovers, the ones she fell hard for very quickly were the ones who were incredible in bed. She said that they guys who were mediocre or lousy in bed, she did not bond with as quickly, or as strongly. She said that it took a while before she had enough experiences to look back on and see and recognize the pattern, but there it is. If you guys who like this think that your wife can fuck incredible lovers who are better in bed than you are, and not fall in love with them, you are out of your mind.
This is how it works. She loves you, but it is not the same as she loves her incredible lover. He is the one who makes her heart sing. He is the one she will daydream about. He is the one that makes her eyes light up when she sees an unexpected text from him. He is the one who make her heart do flip flops when she sees him. He is the one who makes her twirl her fingers through her hair while she is talking with him on the phone. He is the one that makes her want to smile so big it lights up a room.
See, women compare and contrast. They do this with everything. So when a new guy enters her life, she compares and contrasts him with her present guy. Now, when she is just dating, even if she has been dating the same guy for a long time, she will compare and contrast the new man to her present man, and if the new man is better, and wants her to be his, and he makes her feel secure in doing so, she will leave the first guy to be with the new guy. We've all been there. We've all had that happen to us, and some of us were at times, the new guy who she left another guy for.
Now, if she is married, then this is different. She may not leave for the new guy. She wants to, but it may not work for her. She might have kids and doesn't want to put them through a divorce. The new guy may not be nearly as wealthy even if he is superior in all other aspects. She may fear rejection by her family and friends. The new guy may be way too young, or way too old for her to consider him for marriage, even though he is superior in all other ways. She may feel obligated to her husband, such that she would feel guilty for leaving him. And finally, she may love her husband, but just not be IN LOVE with him, but the love is such that she feels safe and secure. The new guy may seem too good to be true, and so she fears he will eventually get bored with her and leave. So she will just ride out the affair as long as she can, and then find a new lover if possible.
The guy who encourages, and or, facilitates his wife having an affair is fooling himself that he has control. He may think that he is making things better for himself. He may think that he is securing his relationship with her. After all, if she has permission to fuck other guys, she doesn't need to leave him, right? The problem is, she is falling in love with these guys, no matter how much she denies it. When she says it's different, she really just means that she hasn't reached a point where she is comfortable leaving you for him. Eventually, she is going fall hard enough for one to the point that she is willing to leave you for him. It's a woman's natural instinct to want to be attached to the alpha. If she can't do that, then she wants to be with one near the top. If you understand that, women's actions and attitudes start making more sense. So make no mistake, if this guy you allow her to fuck, is a whole lot better in bed, is better looking, is taller, more athletic, etc... then you better believe that she fantasizes about being his wife. Something is making her ignore that, acting like an anchor, but just because it is like this now, doesn't mean it won't change. You have no idea what they say to each other when you aren't around. Or when they text each other. She can, after all, delete any text she doesn't want you to see...if she even lets you read them.
Bottom line is that this type of thing may be a fantasy, but you are literally playing with fire, and it is very likely that you will get burned. You can't rewrite the laws of nature. You are going to lose your wife if you do this. And even if she is still with you, it doesn't mean you haven't lost her.
Have to comment on Anon's comment (I was talking to an older lady friend)
That is really well written, cogent analysis of why I always felt that wife sharing/cuckoldry is a dangerous lifestyle. I am not talking about the one off situations on vacation, out of town etc but women who have regular FB's or boyfriends outside the marriage.
Tender Words
Nothing says "I love you" more tenderly to a loving wife than her cuckold's castration.
Right On Anon
Well said Anon (I was talking to an older lady friend). A woman who is "fucking" another guy with the husband or boy friend's consent isn't really In Love with the Hubby or BFriend. It is the difference between "I love you but am not In Love with you." Similar to a sister/brother relationship. To put it simply, without lustful passionate sex there is not relationship.
great story
sure makes me hard!! Can't wait for part 4.
to the anonymous
poster with title "bullshit" -- that must be the best post on this site! The admission that you've been turned down for sex because of being too big and that most women like it average size is quite a statement on Literotica where the assumption everywhere is that a penis can neither be too large nor too black and that to be a white average size guy is an invitation to be cuckolded. I've been longing for someone to actually give that point of view here.
You can find females writing elsewhere with your message -- eg on the Illicit Encounter website where the inevitable question of size came up -- and a couple of women said just what you've said here. But on Literotica? Never! Until now.
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