you should really stop writing this crap and maybe grow up and stop watching WWE it was stupid story line
sorry kid it won't work with adults
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Anonymous11/25/15
crap
Move off the couch, out of mom's house and get a job. You are not a writer. Grow up and act your age.
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Anonymous11/25/15
Therapy
Seek professional help.
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Anonymous11/25/15
Jeez, I've read some crap in my life, but this...
Words fail me, get the fuck off this site, get a job, and actually meet people. Let me give you a hint, sonny; the 'acting' in porn movies is not even that, it's just window-dressing to give 13 year old nerks like you enough time to get your pencil dick out and into your mitt; it is not real life, it's not even a pale shadow of real life, it's just something to fill up the soundtrack before all the "Oooh, ahhh, my God, you're so big, Honey!" starts.Dream on, grow the fuck up, and join the real world.
can I say that's already been said? IT WAS CRAP AND STUPID!
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Anonymous11/25/15
My input
it was a good beginning but I recommend that you make sure your chapters are at least 2 if not 3 pages long.
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Anonymous11/28/15
hmm
maybe the worst and dumbest story I've read on here in a long time.
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Anonymous12/18/15
Glad to see you back
Like the title says, glad to see you back. Really. But this story doesnt even compete with the first story of yours I read on here. Boy wrestles his aunt gina (I think) it was three chapters and its gone now. Hope you tap into that story. This one felt rushed.
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Anonymous01/06/16
Idiots...
Awesome story!
@haters: if you're not into this stuff, why bother read it???
That was intense, but for me it needs a back story, how did Jeff's family get into sexfighting, an why wasn't Jeff into it before his mother walked into his room, to give him a crash course.
English
That was dumb
And stupid within the first paragraph. What is with the new stories today?
Agreed
First comment summed it up. This is pure piss-ignorance from the start. Can we have a muligan for Nov 25th
wow
you should really stop writing this crap and maybe grow up and stop watching WWE it was stupid story line
sorry kid it won't work with adults
crap
Move off the couch, out of mom's house and get a job. You are not a writer. Grow up and act your age.
Therapy
Seek professional help.
Jeez, I've read some crap in my life, but this...
Words fail me, get the fuck off this site, get a job, and actually meet people. Let me give you a hint, sonny; the 'acting' in porn movies is not even that, it's just window-dressing to give 13 year old nerks like you enough time to get your pencil dick out and into your mitt; it is not real life, it's not even a pale shadow of real life, it's just something to fill up the soundtrack before all the "Oooh, ahhh, my God, you're so big, Honey!" starts.Dream on, grow the fuck up, and join the real world.
What
can I say that's already been said? IT WAS CRAP AND STUPID!
My input
it was a good beginning but I recommend that you make sure your chapters are at least 2 if not 3 pages long.
hmm
maybe the worst and dumbest story I've read on here in a long time.
Glad to see you back
Like the title says, glad to see you back. Really. But this story doesnt even compete with the first story of yours I read on here. Boy wrestles his aunt gina (I think) it was three chapters and its gone now. Hope you tap into that story. This one felt rushed.
Idiots...
Awesome story!
@haters: if you're not into this stuff, why bother read it???
The Match?
So is there any chance of us getting to see Jeffery in action against the rival MILF? And how the other family's son fares against Jeffery's mom?
OMG
That was intense, but for me it needs a back story, how did Jeff's family get into sexfighting, an why wasn't Jeff into it before his mother walked into his room, to give him a crash course.
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