All Comments on 'Final Slip Into'

Or something else? I actually found this more erotic than romantic. But that might just be my dirty mind. :) Anyway, a delightful, flowing read, that is interrupted by three-four lines breaking the rhythm. With some more tidying-up, ths would had gotten a straight 5.

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