Missed this when u posted it in Nov - probably because I don't usually scan Group Sex category stories. But ur "Shower" still remains on my browser for this site. So noticing it today tickled my memory about this given piece. Enjoyed it's final form & it gives u ur best ratings so far. Enjoyed ur more recent piece as well. Looking fwd to seeing more of ur work. We'll done & kudos!
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Very Nice
Good writing, you "painted" the scene well.
Very nice, short erotic tale.
Can you share the actual location that inspired this?
Excellent..!
Great story, well written and very erotic..!!
Liked how you described the small intimate details that are so sensual and alive when playing in bliss ,whilst being watched......! More....!
Congrats!
Missed this when u posted it in Nov - probably because I don't usually scan Group Sex category stories. But ur "Shower" still remains on my browser for this site. So noticing it today tickled my memory about this given piece. Enjoyed it's final form & it gives u ur best ratings so far. Enjoyed ur more recent piece as well. Looking fwd to seeing more of ur work. We'll done & kudos!
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