All Comments on 'Dark as Daylight Ch. 04'

Thank you!

This was a serious damn roller coaster

Loved it thank you and keep these beauties comming

Hope you are recovering your health well

Take care these chapters are really precious ;)

Btw i have a question

How can being in stasis shrink the tumor in gordon's brain

I hope its not a typo

as with the rest of your stories this keeps getting better you say your health is bad so I guess you will have to teach someone else how to do your writing and be able to keep up with all the players. you are the only one i follow on this site i read others but always yours. btw anything can shrink or grow in stats. its all in fun so just enjoy and don't ask stupid questions

thanks again and keep up the good health

ed

ms904191 asks: ....How can being in stasis shrink the tumor in gordon's brain....

Out of all of P_D's whimsically comedic mishmash of Whacky Fun Sciencetificless Hyperchondria, (think about it) that possibility is a believable hypothesis.

That some specific tumor, while in stasis, theoretically/maybe lose structural integrity. Resulting in shrinkage of that specific tumor. The Important question is, whether or not the damage it sustains is fatal to the invasive organism? And does not cause an explosive discharge of reproductive material, resulting in metastasis.

The experiments to prove therapeutic treatment will be very dangerous to those individual patients who might benefit from radical new treatments. As each person is exposed to different causation of tumors and not only will each specific tumor react differently too treatment but so will each patient.

I can only concur with the words of ms904191: "This was a serious damn roller coaster".

Thank you for this excellent chapter, I hope you are in ever beter health and in good spirit and will be able to enjoy writing these jewels as much as your fans enjoy reading them.

Oh, and PLEEEEAAAASE, let this not be one of your "short works".

Wishing you all the best!

O M G was getting ready to go to the kitchen to start cooking my smoked turkey legs, but to heck with that. i am going to have a special thanksgiving treat right here and just read. i will leave my comment when done with this chapter. but thanks for this thanksgiving feast.

I wouldn't be surprised to discover that half of the government officials are involved with the plot. As long as business owners are involved in government, the best interest of the people will always lose.

just finished, and now i will go fix a turkey meal.

like how you are bringing things together back on earth.

and life on the ship.

you do write a great story.

the only thing wrong is now i have to wait aprox. another 3 weeks.

thanks for the sheer enjoyment.

tom

so far all four chapters have good just like there must be a mistake keep up the good writing prolonged-debut 10

I hate waiting ... More now ... PLEASE

we seem to get these jewels about every 20 days, and my withdrawal symptoms are kicking in big time.

hope all is well with you.

i am impatiently trying to be patient.

I hope everything is ok with you, I need my usual dose of this story :)

Don't worry about all the idiots, don't worry about even me if I happen to start criticizing your math (I believe there were some math errors with your word counts and story length :-) ). Just write... we love it.

Even those who criticize it... if they did not love it, they wouldn't have read so many installments of it and wouldn't know what to criticize :-)))

I hope nothing is wrong and i think every body would appriciate it if you could post an update

I suspect PD will be posting in time for Christmas, less than a week to go

superb enthralling can't get enough of this prolific writer , i'm away now till after Xmas no computer available will read chapter 5a next week have a very merry Xmas Alun

I am having some issues of logic with this second novel centered around the Luck family.

I said nothing in the first novel about one issue that drives me crazy and then it appears in the second novel. Please.. Please... Please stop saying that a mans penis can penetrate the cervix into the womb - it is just not feasible, Read a medical reference, google it - something but stop continuing to use this as it implies a huge ignorance of a womans body

Second a logic problem. As the ship is attempting to brake below light speed. Lets just take the term Warp speed. This gained prevalence in the language from the many years of Star Trek to the point it was actually placed into the dictionary. If we are going to base it on Star Trek we need to use the their formula, which is found to be somewhat inconsistent, being Velocity = Warp speed (cubed) * speed of light.

When they are zipping along at Warp 4 they are traveling at 715,324,183 miles per minute. And how are they turning this egg in all these different directions? The have retracted the nuclear engine. The logic is just not there. So it became a bit frustrating to read this area.

But I like the story and I am still reading onward to find out what happens next !! I will just brush past the areas that make no sense.

compelling read, full of activity

smoking mirrors doors and corridoors.

thanku very much

will continue now

cheers

The More They Stay The Same. This story is thrilling. It is to the point that I can't wait to read the next installment, even as I just finished reading this one. The attention to detail, the character development, and the breadth of the story itself keeps me enthralled from the opening word. I just love this series.

Hello again.

I am up to chapter 04.

I found an error in chapter 04, page 6

" I would send him you in there with a large container of blue resin, to fill in the gaps."