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A fun play on an old theme.

at the reader or are you making a statement about the mundane? Yet, it seems you are attempting to paint a picture of photographic conquest? Best to avoid this sing song stuff unless you like singing that song. But your choice dear "first," but why not deal with submission as you have forced us to do reading this entry? Below is a poor example of where you are headed with the flower approach to verse. We all look forward to more serious erotic effort from you. Please accept this comment with a laugh.

Roses are red, please use your head.

A damp camel toe is better you know

Then one that is dry and beckons you nigh

Violets you see mean little to me

But legs spread so wide will call us inside

Roses are red, please don't crap in our bed

Or on our dear poetry site, please keep it right