All Comments on 'Mrs Beattie's Christmas Tree'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Memories

Yes you always your first time, memories, memories

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent!

What a great story..The ending allow each reader to personalize it.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Who knows?

Well, after that introductory weekend, Mrs. Beattie helps Robert find a full-time, regular job and helps him further develop his bedroom skills. That was romantic & a fine story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You were right

You were right to end it the way you did. Perfect in fact; left so much room for (1) a future installment or two, (2) the reader's imagination to fill in the blanks. Thank you for putting together such a great "first time" story for all of us to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more!

Will there be a new years cebration?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I didn't expect a comedy

I have laughed really hard quite a few times while reading this. I hope you win the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well told

I think it was perfect to end it as you did. We all know the details of the deed, it's the scene that makes the story interesting.

Thanks

Zach_lost_in_AusZach_lost_in_Ausabout 8 years ago
Bravo!

A great little tale. With your signature 'voice', very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Nice :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great writing!

Super build of anticipation. More chapters would be great, please.

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