by geronimo_appleby
What a great story..The ending allow each reader to personalize it.
Thanks!
Well, after that introductory weekend, Mrs. Beattie helps Robert find a full-time, regular job and helps him further develop his bedroom skills. That was romantic & a fine story.
You were right to end it the way you did. Perfect in fact; left so much room for (1) a future installment or two, (2) the reader's imagination to fill in the blanks. Thank you for putting together such a great "first time" story for all of us to enjoy.
I have laughed really hard quite a few times while reading this. I hope you win the contest.
I think it was perfect to end it as you did. We all know the details of the deed, it's the scene that makes the story interesting.
Thanks
Super build of anticipation. More chapters would be great, please.