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So glad to see this back!
As before, you manage to make sexy without being explicit, and I was absolutely immersed in the story - who'd have thought an accountant could be so sexy! Now I need the rest of the tale, you started this, so you have no excuse. 5 stars, even if they don't show up, plus another 50 for being so good at what you do, and a plea for the continuation as soon as you have the time (hint, be quick about it, once Her Royal Holiness gets her teeth into your neck, like Varney the Vampyre she won't let go until her teeth meet - you have been warned...)
Will.
You and beach
In my eyes you and beachbum are the kings of romantic incest on this page
What a way to end a year!
Thanks once more for a superb chapter and congrats for making accountants look sexy as hell!
You once more created a superb chapter full of romance and sibling love yet you also spiced ti up with accounting action, drama, fraud, intimidations and loads of paperwork. I laughed my ass off when Bart came out clean about them, good thing neither of them got a heart attack. That segment also made it clear how easy it comes to you to make people in your stories life-like, likeable and easy to understand.
Though one question remains - why go with the complicated plan of vacation for the mystery lover when their secret is out and everyone's OK with it? Wouldn't it be easier and more cost effective to just stay at home and make a kid there, or is it just to keep the potential problems off-trail and give the folks something to guess about?
Nonetheless it was another great submission worth of 5*+ even if no voting is up!!!
Have a happy new year and a festive night of the old one!
As anonymous said ....
You and beachbum are the kings, but I would add in Xarth too. I don't know how I missed this story the first time around. Can't wait for the rest, and your new work.
Still a Good Tale
Nice to have this back. As the Beachbum says and threatens, now get busy on the continuation. I didn't like it when you abandoned this the first time and I'll like it even less if you do it again. I will not threaten you since I have a couple of begged favors pending and I am anxious for them. Give yourself 18 or 20 stars and keep up the good work.
Jack
Thank you and keep going...
Will and Jack are both right, this is a wonderful story from a thoughtful and considered writer, full of warmth and a deep concern for your characters. I'd like to give you five hundred stars, but as I can't vote here, you'll just have to take it as read. Please do find the time to finish this story as soon as humanly possible, you know how much I love them. And Will is going to pay for that 'Varney the Vampyre' crack one day very soon...
Luvvya,
Lori
Brilliant story so far
But please continue on. I was slightly confused to why Dee Dee and George didn't just fuck like bunnies and have a baby especially when Bart virtually told them he knew they were fucking each other and the whole town assumed also. I couldn't see the point of them leaving. Other than that, well done ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It keeps getting more interesting
In addition to romance you've added, mystery and drama.
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