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by erectus12311/26/15

well done - 5

one wonders what the last line refers to and if it is really needed. The rest of the work draws a bleak atmosphere of rest homes and how upsetting it is to find our loved ones or ourselves confined within as well as the theme of aging central to the work. I wish I had the brains to understand ever line but it moved me just the same.

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by tazz31711/26/15

THE ESSENCE OF OLD AGE

its cause and cure. TK U MLJ LV NV

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