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Cruel!
That you are leaving us in suspense about what Timmy has in mind for Janey's clit. There just has to be a Part 2. And five stars, by the way.
Thanks, Anonymous...
I thought of continuing this story. I have posted a couple full-length books on Amazon, under the name Helen Pierce Melville. The most recent one is "Games Some People Play"--worth looking at. Thanks so much for making a comment. Very important to writers...
Almost 14,000 readers open the story; one leaves a comment.
I wonder why?
Where's the rest, this is so good...
I like this a lot , I hope she gets what's coming to her
Yes, Please Finish
So please finish the story: Much, much more to go, isn't there? Don't be like so many and put a partial story line out there and then abandon it, it's not nice : )
Hello Anon "Yes, please finish..."
Sure, I understand. I already wrote and submitted chapter 2, but Literotica rejected it. Apparently, it violates a rule against stories that describe too much abuse and too little pleasure...also against rape... I don't get the point, really, since the first chapter sets the stage for all this. At any rate, I have to figure out what to do... Thanks for writing as you did.
Just a few rules.
Sex should be fun, even if your tied to a table. So Timmy wants revenge good, I'm not sure you can give a girl blue balls, or jack off her clit, is that possible.?
Every boy there should try and it goes without saying if she comes on your turn well there is the electric wand and young erections. !
I love commenting but sometimes I'm concerned about reveling my ..........
One more thought.
Write a vanilla story and see if there is more response. What a fantastic site, I'm certainly getting my moneys worth. There are a few stories with over a million views and not a million responses your in good company. Plus look where you are, not that there's anything wrong with that, but we all clamour for a touch or response. I had trouble with facebook, thinking I was the most interesting man in the world, and got a few likes, no comments. ! Hahaha....
It is what it is.
Part 3 anytime soon story's are èasly lost, there are sooo many....
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