All Comments on 'The One Exception Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed your story, it was believable because it was paced so well. The sex was excitingly well written and I hope part 2 isnt too long off.

Very well done!!!!

Your story was great,left me wanting more! Hope in the morning they take it farther!

5 stars..perfectly paced. Favorite story.

This story was so hot! I hope you will write more soon.

Can we now see them have some not drunk sex? I look forward to chapter 2!

that at the end one of them would say, "I might be a lesbian."

i loved this and the characters details was amazing. i love the depth of it snd it was only 2 pages. your great please create more i would love to read what happens next

Got me wet can't wait for more👅

Much fun to read!

Thank you!

L

Only reason I became a member is so I could keep this story available in case I forgot the name. Really good, thank you for sharing.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very well written. I really enjoyed it. Definitely hope there will be more.

SB

Very well written, the character development was perfect. You have the beginnings of something special here.

Oh wow, this is such a beautiful story, especially if it's The One Exception, you would definitely want it to be like this. Brava!!!

You write so damn well. Exceptionally well written

This was so amazing, good job!

I loved reading that story one of the best SO SEXY the sex sounded erotic but with tender loving overtones gorgeous Elle ❤️❤️❤️❤️