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The Strain Pt. 03

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by erectus12311/28/15

very creative

story of earth's human's sexual submission to super beings.
You need a better title!

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by skywriter6211/28/15

Yeah that occurred to me

It is my first posted story. The story started off in one direction with rough ideas for future parts and then it seems to head off in another direction which takes it further from the title. Newbie writing problem. I appreciate the comment really.

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by Anonymous11/28/15

Awesome

Great writing style, and very hot!

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by Anonymous12/01/15

That was so hot

I almost wish some of this were real...with the exception of being turned into one of them. I'd rather just serve as a sex slave, but still not become one of them.

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