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by IvyWillcox

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erectus123erectus123over 8 years ago
classic philosophical

poem, accurate comments on modern life, the last few lines seem rougher than those preceding,

"You now know time is priceless

And can't be turned back

At any cost"

might be smoother if "You know time is priceless/ it can't be turned back at any cost" just a suggestion.....

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