All Comments on 'First Time'

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LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
A great start

I hope there is more to this!

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rml65rml65over 8 years ago
Great start!

Great start but ended to quick! Hope you add more to this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Yes i hope there's more. Was sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So hot

Luved it. Like the short stories.

shang40shang40over 8 years ago
It's but natural

Lesbian love comes naturally. And the teacher is always special

Making teacher happy with cunnilingus love is special for the student.

Very hot but short story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful

I really love this tender story about the student truly loving her Coach. It's innocent and erotic simultaneously! It brings back fond memories for me of the crushes I always seemed to have on a teacher when I was in highschool. Great story! Keep writing!

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not bad

A good start, I only hope the other parts are just as good

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Nice.

Bluebathrobe69Bluebathrobe69over 2 years ago

Great story....i love the student teacher pairing....vert hott

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