We fell back on the shore and I began to ride him right there, on the shore...Are you sure you're right there on the shore? It seems that's been established.
Thank you for pointing the error out to me. I was typing late at night and was tired. My mind was probably beginning to lose attention span. I apologise for the silly oversight.
Also, thanks to jasjon, for supporting my story, even with the errors in it. I am pleased to hear that you liked it. It means a lot to me to get feedback on my stories.
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summer night swim
I grasped hi cock in my hand...um huh.
We fell back on the shore and I began to ride him right there, on the shore...Are you sure you're right there on the shore? It seems that's been established.
Think about this.
5 stars
Thank you little Annony grammar nazi. There were a few mistakes, that didn't effect the story. Lighten up, nobody's perfect .
Thank you
Thank you for pointing the error out to me. I was typing late at night and was tired. My mind was probably beginning to lose attention span. I apologise for the silly oversight.
Also, thanks to jasjon, for supporting my story, even with the errors in it. I am pleased to hear that you liked it. It means a lot to me to get feedback on my stories.
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