Quotes about hubris come to mind seeing her plotting. "The beginning of the end(hers)," "Pride goeth before ..." and all those. The formula says she'll be thwarted and fall for him, then he'll decide to keep her. Will the kidnapper reappear for him to defeat? Will the kidnapper be her Daddy trying to teach her a lesson?
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Anonymous12/03/15
He'll especially succumb to her charms.......
when she belches chili breath in his face! This was SO bad it made me laugh. Nothing says sexy, erotic or captivating as eating chili out of a pan. I'm still laughing!
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Good storyline, please check your grammer or get another author to proof read your story before publishing. Keep up the great story.
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Quotes about hubris come to mind seeing her plotting. "The beginning of the end(hers)," "Pride goeth before ..." and all those. The formula says she'll be thwarted and fall for him, then he'll decide to keep her. Will the kidnapper reappear for him to defeat? Will the kidnapper be her Daddy trying to teach her a lesson?
I'm enjoying this. Thanks
He'll especially succumb to her charms.......
when she belches chili breath in his face! This was SO bad it made me laugh. Nothing says sexy, erotic or captivating as eating chili out of a pan. I'm still laughing!
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