by katiesuger
I have no idea if this is fantasy or reality. I do know it is one helluva a very well written story. The writer may not be an aspiring author, but I surely hope to read more.
Definitely a 5 star read.
Katiesugar, you convinced me that this really happened. The technical details and sequence conveyed in your excellent style either came from experience or from an incredible immagination. Either way I couldn't stop reading. I loved how the story slowly built to a climax--or four! And Katiesuger, we eagerly await the date you promised so keep writing!!!
The beginning build up was intensely hot. The act, not so much, since there was mostly description of Robert. The other guys barely had a role. It would've been better if they all had equal, or different experiences....
Your work reminds me of another author; I just can't think of whom. I enjoyed your build up and general approach of providing both details about your feelings and insight and analysis of what was happening with each your partners. I gave you a 5; but agree with the previous comment about to much focus on Robert and believe that you need to balance your experiences when in groups to share yourself in a more equal way. Also I agree with one of the other comments, this is more of blow bang than a gang bang. Look forward to you sharing more of your experiences and hope that you have experienced a true full gang bang and have an opportunity to share it with us.
I loved the detail and slow build up--it has an air of authenticity. Just reading about these hot guys makes me a little slippery. This is excellent erotica. Well done.
We are waiting for more stories from you, please would you write some soon.
Kate
You are a great story teller, you describe yourself & the guys very well. I like all of your detail in it, not, just "stick it in & go". I want to read more about your adventures. I bet you even had a few at work, as late as you work some nights. Maybe not as erotic as the 4 guys, but still, & put those great B boobs on the color copier. I'd love to have a copy of that. (Actually real photos would be better) but it sounds so sexy to xerox you & those beautiful tits.
Thanks again.
Bob
California
The guys were right, they were not creepy & did respect her. Good news for everyone.
What can I say, a beautiful story. Loved the way you built the sexual tension up.
You must write some more!
Anna
Imagine being told that your daughter was in a sex video with a rugby team! Well it happened to me! Obviously my friends tried everything to hide the video from me but eventually I saw it and couldn't believe what I saw,the local rugby team had just won the league and celebrated in the bar at the gym,my daughter Sophia works there and sat down with the lads after she'd finished her shift,the video starts showing Sophia being carried on the boys shoulders into the changing rooms,Sophia had clearly had a lot to drink,the boys stood around her in a circle and she took her clothes off in the centre,she kneeled on the floor and worked her way around the boys sucking all of them off,I counted them and there were 18 boys all getting a blowjob from Sophia, you can imagine what happened next? They all took their turns to fuck her! Even dping her later on