Thank you! I just started taking classes to advance my degree, so I am not sure how close I will stay to daily, but I'm hoping for at least four chapters a week. 🙂
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Anonymous12/02/15
my sad addiction
wow, more please
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Anonymous12/02/15
you really are good
the sex scenes are super hot which is a real compliment since so few writers on here can write those scenes with enough tension to make them truth titillating. But you're stories would be good without them which is saying something.
Awe, sad addiction? I want it to make you happy, in the end, and maybe a little bit...aroused? This is erotica, right?
You really are good: THANK YOU. I started posting here to get a feel for what people thought of the way I write and it has been extremely beneficial to me as I smooth out the ruffles in my writing. I only expected to write Anya's story...but now I am hooked just like many of my readers!!! And the words about not even needing the sex to be present...I struggle with that, sometimes the chapter just needs to be there, but doesn't really need sex, but then I am writing erotica and feel like it should be. It's a double edged sword sometimes.
I have been reading my whole life, and let me tell you that you are a wonderful writer. You got me hooked and that's a hard thing to accomplish. I started reading this with low expectations, since I have read so many vampire stories that ended up being horrible, but I understi,ated you. You and your writing is simply wonderfull, exciting and erotic. You arevnow on my top best writers here and that is a lot to say. I will be doong some more reading on your other stories, looking foward to Anya's. Keep writing like this, inspirational.
English
Love how quickly you are updating
It is such a pleasant surprise to find an update so regularly, keeps the story flowing so much better
Re:Littlecat76
Thank you! I just started taking classes to advance my degree, so I am not sure how close I will stay to daily, but I'm hoping for at least four chapters a week. 🙂
my sad addiction
wow, more please
you really are good
the sex scenes are super hot which is a real compliment since so few writers on here can write those scenes with enough tension to make them truth titillating. But you're stories would be good without them which is saying something.
Re: All
Awe, sad addiction? I want it to make you happy, in the end, and maybe a little bit...aroused? This is erotica, right?
You really are good: THANK YOU. I started posting here to get a feel for what people thought of the way I write and it has been extremely beneficial to me as I smooth out the ruffles in my writing. I only expected to write Anya's story...but now I am hooked just like many of my readers!!! And the words about not even needing the sex to be present...I struggle with that, sometimes the chapter just needs to be there, but doesn't really need sex, but then I am writing erotica and feel like it should be. It's a double edged sword sometimes.
Wonderful
I have been reading my whole life, and let me tell you that you are a wonderful writer. You got me hooked and that's a hard thing to accomplish. I started reading this with low expectations, since I have read so many vampire stories that ended up being horrible, but I understi,ated you. You and your writing is simply wonderfull, exciting and erotic. You arevnow on my top best writers here and that is a lot to say. I will be doong some more reading on your other stories, looking foward to Anya's. Keep writing like this, inspirational.
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