Wow! Great story... will Mrs. Smith and Mom tie him down and see how many loads they can extract from his cock before he shoots dust? =)
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Anonymous01/20/04
Please,please a sequel!
It's not hot,it's radioactive!!!A treesome with Mrs.Smith and mom would be awesome!Don't ever stop writing!
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Anonymous01/20/04
Fan-fucking-tastic!!!
Great story man. Really, really good writing, great dialogue. Totally hot. Please write more.
by
Anonymous01/20/04
GREAT
great story wish my mom was like that cant wait until the next chapter when mom and Mrs. Smith get him
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Anonymous01/20/04
My Thoughts
I think you should make a sequal and have Mrs. Smith join in with him and his mom. I think you should make both the girls his sluts to have whenever he wants them.
by
Anonymous01/20/04
damn
this is probably the best story i have read on this site. please hurry and make the next installment. i can't wait
ed
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Anonymous01/20/04
Great Dialogue
Wonderful story with a honesty not found in most erotica. The Ms Smith character has so much potential for this stories growth, I hope it is handled with the same care as this first instalment. I wouldn't rush into the threesome to quickly though but play on the Son and Mother watching her first.. Her visit in the first part could be just a measuring of the Son in her eyes. Knowing he is watching but having know idea that the mother is involved. Just a thought of course. Great Job!!!
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Anonymous01/20/04
Get Mrs. Smith Involved QUICK
Great read carry on with the next chapter
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Anonymous01/20/04
Off Glass
That story was hella tight. It kept me wanting to finish it. You need to hurry and finsh it off. What happens with Mrs. Smith. THat was great.
This is the kinda stories I like to read, I love big tits too and the story line and the realism of it just kept me pulled in, I hope this turns into a string of stories because I could get into this plot. Great writing!!
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Anonymous01/20/04
Out Fucking Standing
I love mom and big boobs too. The story was one of the best ever on literotica. Kept me hard and wanted to jerk off over and over. Please more of the same.
Bob
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Anonymous01/20/04
Keep going.
Definately has lots of potential. Mom and Mrs. Smith and God knows who else. Keep going.
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Anonymous01/20/04
JUST AWSOME
HELLO ALL
If you like big tits you will love this story , I just hope that his next story in done fast . With this stroy thier is so many way this can go . I hope that he get a lot of great feed back and that he will be more than willing to go on with this story . A new fan
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Anonymous01/20/04
Cant wait for part two!
Probably one of the most well-written stories I have read from this site! Hurry on the sequel.
by
Anonymous01/21/04
unfinished
story is interesting,but needs to be completed so please finish the story. hate to read un finished stories.
by
Anonymous01/21/04
Please Continue
The transition throughout was done well.
Keeping the unexpected happening is not easy with as many stories as have been written.
by
Anonymous01/21/04
Please Cum Again
Fuckng great. Sounds like this mom can use some more cock. I wonder who sucks better, mom or mrs. Smith. Get on the sequal fast.
by
Anonymous01/21/04
Un-fucking believable!
This is one of the best mother-son stories I have ever read. In fact, it is one of the best stories I have ever read. It builds so nicely that I was completely entranced and not a little disappointed when it abruptly came to its end. GIVE US MORE, PLEASE!
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Anonymous01/21/04
best read story in a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bobby T, you are one damn fine writer!!!! I avidly look forward to your next chapters!!! Please, I hope you can write about all the different variations of chartacter interactions, strorylines, etc. I read alot of the literotica stories/authors. This is the first story I have read from you. You instantly topped out as one of my top 3 favorite authors at literotica. Please, keep up the excellent work!
I haven't been reading sex stories much as of late but I must admit this is one of the best I have ever read. It could have been shortened a little bit (maybe down to 3 pages). The things that could have been edited down is the character's obsession with his big penis. I mean the mother becomes obsessed so as it is so maybe if he talked a little less about the size and giving himself a BJ (that part was a turnoff) I would have liked the story even more. Usually I don't go for the longer stories but this one kept me through til the end.
I notice that fans seem to go more for the stories written in the first person. As a fan and a fellow Literotica writer I also prefer this style of writing. It makes it more personal so that the reader can interject him or herself into the story.
You did a great job of this and should be proud of yourself. Get working on that sequel or you will have lot's of disappointed fans. You can reach me my Literotica email address if you want to write back. Take care and good luck.
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Anonymous01/21/04
don't stop
you are on the right track..love big cock stories...you might even tell us just how big it is....and I know Mrs. Smith wants some too.....keep it going...don't stop now
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Anonymous01/21/04
more
looking forward to chapter 20
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Anonymous01/21/04
excellent story - please keep writing!!!
this story was great!!! i hope you will continue with this storyline and also return to your other stories - particularly the "cumming of age" series. i am dying to read more about linda, the safeway lady, and the two moms!!!
you are an excellent storyteller and i hope you will continue. i wouldn't mind seeing some pregnancy and some lactation in your stories if you're looking for ideas. big hanging, milk leaking tits are awesome!
Don't stop now. I really enjoyed your previous works and was
delighted to find this one. I apologise for the assholes that suggest things for you to write, if they have such great ideas let them write it themselves.
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Anonymous01/21/04
Awsome Story
I cannot wait to see what happens next. . .
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Anonymous01/21/04
LOVE IT!!!!
kick ass story can't wait to read more, only you think maybe in future installments there could be some tittyfucking involved?:):)
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Anonymous01/21/04
Keep Up the Good Work
I really enjoyed this story as I have enjoyed all of you works. Keep it up:)
Welcome back Bobby T. In my perception you are one of the very best of Literotica and the long absence of new stories was a sorry state of affairs. Keep them coming...
Very nice! As a fellow author, I am humbled and inspired as well. Great job!
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Anonymous01/22/04
Wow
Good shit. The best.
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Anonymous01/22/04
WELCOME BACK BOBBY T
GREAT STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE IT... SOON
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Anonymous01/22/04
Another Classic Bobby T story
You have a knack for putting the reader into story itself and feeling the
emotions of the main character. Hot! Hot1 Hot! Please continue the
story and also sequels to your other stories, "Cumming of Age" and
"How do you spell relief?". Thank you again for your storytelling skills.
Ive read two of your stories now and they are both really good! You have a real knack for writing so keep it up, and I would like to know if you are going to do anymore on Bobby's Mom Ch. 1 please let me know. Thanks.
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Anonymous01/23/04
Great, more.
Great story, better than mine. More is good and I assume Ms. Smith will play?
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Anonymous01/23/04
Great story
Great story. Hope the next part has more tit play and maybe a good messy ending on them.
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Anonymous01/23/04
Awesome writing - detail the flight of the cum
I loved this story. Possibly take advantage of this character's gift of unlimited cum and his mom's love for endless cum by describing in detail the flight of each rope and drop of cum as it leaves the tip of his dick and where it lands and it'll be perfect - for me at least! Make each spurt a story in itself :)
Regardless - this is one of the best!
by
Anonymous01/24/04
Getting his mom to go anal
Hello,
I want you to consider getting the son to get his mom to give her virgin asshole up to him. there has to be ANAL!
by
Anonymous01/24/04
Love huge tited mom stories
I would like to see her and the big titted slut next door going at each other and then trade his cock back and forth. I would also like to see his mother take it up her ass while the slut next door eats her and licks and sucks his cock.
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Anonymous01/25/04
Great Story!
Definitely want to read more. More tit play would be great.
this is a excellent story it should have a second Chapter to this one and maybe a on going story leading to something. Keep up the good work and hope to see a sequal to this one...
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Anonymous01/26/04
more titty fucking
great story best one so far ive read... add more things with titty fucking
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Anonymous01/27/04
great
keep it up man you write some of the best stories ive ever read so keep up to good work
English
Great Story
One of the best stories that I have ever read between a son and his cock-loving mother.
Great! Graet! Story!
Do not ever stop writting! Damn, what a great storie! I can't wait to read the sequal.
A personal question ... Do you ever include a dog with your Mom and Son stories? I would hope so! Mom and Son, and Dog and Woman are my favorite!
Thank you for this very good story!
Excellent Story
The best Mom/son story I have read in a long time! More, more, more!
Excellent
Can't wait for the sequel.
When he leaves for college, can I have his mom?
Wow! Great story... will Mrs. Smith and Mom tie him down and see how many loads they can extract from his cock before he shoots dust? =)
Please,please a sequel!
It's not hot,it's radioactive!!!A treesome with Mrs.Smith and mom would be awesome!Don't ever stop writing!
Fan-fucking-tastic!!!
Great story man. Really, really good writing, great dialogue. Totally hot. Please write more.
GREAT
great story wish my mom was like that cant wait until the next chapter when mom and Mrs. Smith get him
My Thoughts
I think you should make a sequal and have Mrs. Smith join in with him and his mom. I think you should make both the girls his sluts to have whenever he wants them.
damn
this is probably the best story i have read on this site. please hurry and make the next installment. i can't wait
ed
Great Dialogue
Wonderful story with a honesty not found in most erotica. The Ms Smith character has so much potential for this stories growth, I hope it is handled with the same care as this first instalment. I wouldn't rush into the threesome to quickly though but play on the Son and Mother watching her first.. Her visit in the first part could be just a measuring of the Son in her eyes. Knowing he is watching but having know idea that the mother is involved. Just a thought of course. Great Job!!!
Get Mrs. Smith Involved QUICK
Great read carry on with the next chapter
Off Glass
That story was hella tight. It kept me wanting to finish it. You need to hurry and finsh it off. What happens with Mrs. Smith. THat was great.
boring
too long
That was the joint
This is the kinda stories I like to read, I love big tits too and the story line and the realism of it just kept me pulled in, I hope this turns into a string of stories because I could get into this plot. Great writing!!
Out Fucking Standing
I love mom and big boobs too. The story was one of the best ever on literotica. Kept me hard and wanted to jerk off over and over. Please more of the same.
Bob
Keep going.
Definately has lots of potential. Mom and Mrs. Smith and God knows who else. Keep going.
JUST AWSOME
HELLO ALL
If you like big tits you will love this story , I just hope that his next story in done fast . With this stroy thier is so many way this can go . I hope that he get a lot of great feed back and that he will be more than willing to go on with this story . A new fan
Cant wait for part two!
Probably one of the most well-written stories I have read from this site! Hurry on the sequel.
unfinished
story is interesting,but needs to be completed so please finish the story. hate to read un finished stories.
Please Continue
The transition throughout was done well.
Keeping the unexpected happening is not easy with as many stories as have been written.
Please Cum Again
Fuckng great. Sounds like this mom can use some more cock. I wonder who sucks better, mom or mrs. Smith. Get on the sequal fast.
Un-fucking believable!
This is one of the best mother-son stories I have ever read. In fact, it is one of the best stories I have ever read. It builds so nicely that I was completely entranced and not a little disappointed when it abruptly came to its end. GIVE US MORE, PLEASE!
best read story in a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bobby T, you are one damn fine writer!!!! I avidly look forward to your next chapters!!! Please, I hope you can write about all the different variations of chartacter interactions, strorylines, etc. I read alot of the literotica stories/authors. This is the first story I have read from you. You instantly topped out as one of my top 3 favorite authors at literotica. Please, keep up the excellent work!
One of the best
I haven't been reading sex stories much as of late but I must admit this is one of the best I have ever read. It could have been shortened a little bit (maybe down to 3 pages). The things that could have been edited down is the character's obsession with his big penis. I mean the mother becomes obsessed so as it is so maybe if he talked a little less about the size and giving himself a BJ (that part was a turnoff) I would have liked the story even more. Usually I don't go for the longer stories but this one kept me through til the end.
I notice that fans seem to go more for the stories written in the first person. As a fan and a fellow Literotica writer I also prefer this style of writing. It makes it more personal so that the reader can interject him or herself into the story.
You did a great job of this and should be proud of yourself. Get working on that sequel or you will have lot's of disappointed fans. You can reach me my Literotica email address if you want to write back. Take care and good luck.
don't stop
you are on the right track..love big cock stories...you might even tell us just how big it is....and I know Mrs. Smith wants some too.....keep it going...don't stop now
more
looking forward to chapter 20
excellent story - please keep writing!!!
this story was great!!! i hope you will continue with this storyline and also return to your other stories - particularly the "cumming of age" series. i am dying to read more about linda, the safeway lady, and the two moms!!!
you are an excellent storyteller and i hope you will continue. i wouldn't mind seeing some pregnancy and some lactation in your stories if you're looking for ideas. big hanging, milk leaking tits are awesome!
keep up the good work
Wow!
Wow! More please.
Great Job!
Please continue! Great reading! The lucky boy!
ALRIGHT! A NEW BOBBY T. SERIES.
Don't stop now. I really enjoyed your previous works and was
delighted to find this one. I apologise for the assholes that suggest things for you to write, if they have such great ideas let them write it themselves.
Awsome Story
I cannot wait to see what happens next. . .
LOVE IT!!!!
kick ass story can't wait to read more, only you think maybe in future installments there could be some tittyfucking involved?:):)
Keep Up the Good Work
I really enjoyed this story as I have enjoyed all of you works. Keep it up:)
Bobby T. is back!!
Welcome back Bobby T. In my perception you are one of the very best of Literotica and the long absence of new stories was a sorry state of affairs. Keep them coming...
well done!!
well done! can't wait to read more!
Wow!
Very nice! As a fellow author, I am humbled and inspired as well. Great job!
Wow
Good shit. The best.
WELCOME BACK BOBBY T
GREAT STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE IT... SOON
Another Classic Bobby T story
You have a knack for putting the reader into story itself and feeling the
emotions of the main character. Hot! Hot1 Hot! Please continue the
story and also sequels to your other stories, "Cumming of Age" and
"How do you spell relief?". Thank you again for your storytelling skills.
damn good
Ive read two of your stories now and they are both really good! You have a real knack for writing so keep it up, and I would like to know if you are going to do anymore on Bobby's Mom Ch. 1 please let me know. Thanks.
Great, more.
Great story, better than mine. More is good and I assume Ms. Smith will play?
Great story
Great story. Hope the next part has more tit play and maybe a good messy ending on them.
Awesome writing - detail the flight of the cum
I loved this story. Possibly take advantage of this character's gift of unlimited cum and his mom's love for endless cum by describing in detail the flight of each rope and drop of cum as it leaves the tip of his dick and where it lands and it'll be perfect - for me at least! Make each spurt a story in itself :)
Regardless - this is one of the best!
Getting his mom to go anal
Hello,
I want you to consider getting the son to get his mom to give her virgin asshole up to him. there has to be ANAL!
Love huge tited mom stories
I would like to see her and the big titted slut next door going at each other and then trade his cock back and forth. I would also like to see his mother take it up her ass while the slut next door eats her and licks and sucks his cock.
Great Story!
Definitely want to read more. More tit play would be great.
making a sequal
this is a excellent story it should have a second Chapter to this one and maybe a on going story leading to something. Keep up the good work and hope to see a sequal to this one...
more titty fucking
great story best one so far ive read... add more things with titty fucking
great
keep it up man you write some of the best stories ive ever read so keep up to good work
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