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A very good start!
Very good, you have laid all the groundwork for what could be an interesting story series. This story could go in any one of several directions.
Please do continue!
It was very enjoyable, and I found it difficult to believe that it was your first submission!
good start
a good well written start to what could be a very fine story.
Good beginning
With a name like agera_r, and mentioning M3's and Supra's... I'd guess you were a car enthusiast. From one enthusiast to the next, good story. Interested to see where it goes
Excellent start
More please. :-)
Great first effort!
Great effort, first or otherwise. I liked the tone of it, tough, hard-boiled humor. You drew your characters very well - I could see and hear them. This is crying out for a sequel.
Loved reading it
Nicely put together and believable.
A very good start
I might have taken it a bit further for a first chapter, but to each his own.
BTW, you might as well update your profile, your writing gives you away. Probably UK ?
Really Enjoyed It
You did a good job. I'm hooked and want to read the rest of your chapters. Please keep at it as you will only improve and you've shown you have talent.
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