All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 01'

Sounds like we could be into an interesting story here...

Looking forward to where this might lead. Hope the next chapter follows soon.

This tale has good prospects. Looking forward to the next episode.

You've got a good grounding for potentially a great story. Can't wait for the next submission.

Norm Is THE man! Do Him ProuD!

I hear the Alan Parsons Music all the time. Great set, super told - keep it up. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Tales of Mystery and Imagination ... great album! And didn't he produce Pink Floyd's "Dark Side of the Moon"?

Thank you for the positive comments. The next few chapters are in the pipeline. Hope they live up to your expectations.

I can't resist!!!

Good writing and a decent plot, however the first installment ends rather abruptly.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

Just started to read this. I like the lead in to the plot. lets see what's in the next chapter. shall we!

Lots of backgrounding, maybe more than necessary, but I can see this leading to Norm getting interested in one and then her finding out about the bet and... lets hope it's not that formulaic.

Jason

The central proposition, the bet, is crass. I know, it's a story, but not even the prospect of Massimo's humiliation tempts me to continue. I very much enjoy a lot of your writing, so on this occasion, thanks but no thanks.

Very well written! I’m looking forward to seeing how this unfolds :)

First thing you do when playing bridge with strangers is to discuss which conventions you will use

Great start of what has great potential to be a great story, is that too many 'greats'? Very good character background and build up. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I read 6 or 7 of your stories before this one. You started out great and you've maintained and exceeded that level every time.

The hook is set. 😊