All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 03'

Before I got to the "next" morning even, I was thinking about the partners not being under any person's control for the card games, & either/both of them insisting/suggesting plans for future meetings, "dalliances", etc.

The build up wasn't too lengthy as I like a story.

The bet is an intriguing sideline.

The characters are fleshed out well; I like the way you've combined mind-set and physical descriptions. Characters are realistic.

Add in that I don't know anything about bridge!

This chapter kept my interest indeed, I can't wait for the story to continue!

The story had a nice setup and good first section of erotica. Guessing where it goes from here is intriguing - will it be a 4-0 slam? How will he cockblock Massimo?(interesting name by the way). I'd love even more description of the physicality of all the senses in the passion scenes. It would be better if each episode was longer in my opinion - one page episodes always seem a bit short. Good work, keep it up.

Once again instead of just dropping the end of the chapter, you could add another sentence. Something like: Then I went down and got in my car and returned home to rest up for the week ahead. Just suggestions.

That Carmen is one HOT dish! BIG tits,a full ass,and a sex fiend is the perfect date for the weekend! Don't think the other broads can top Carmen in the "HOT SEX" department! I guess we'll see.

Plan well and the benefits can be so sweet.

A very well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Hot story. and it's nice to read one that's properly spelled and punctuated throughout. I know I'm a grammar nerd, but seeing obvious bloopers makes me wince, and wonder about our educational system. Thanks for your diligence, and for sharing this story with us.