I would have liked the story be carried through to an ending rather than just ending with the sex. Finding the daughter,bedding the daughter, resolving the blackmail, getting a good cheque from dad and then bedding mother and daughter together perhaps. Could have been better.
I always find a favorite line when I read your stories, Doctor. One that makes me want to knock on your skull and ask if your brain can come out and play.
---- Very attractive. I said, turning the picture over to see if there was some trick to how they made her tits look so real. ----
This one earned you a devil/kiss/dancing banana on my personal story merit scale. Thank you for the long-awaited sequel; the literary world needs more dicks like yours.
The story has a beautiful flow, nice balance of humor against plot line and, naturally, sex. You conjur some real imagery with economy of words, much to be admired. Thanks, look forward to 1.5 (this a new style - half chapters?)
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Anonymous04/08/05
Great Stuff
Gotta have more! This is a great series with lots of potential!!
English
GREAT
At last a good story and not just something to jerk off to. thank you
Could be better
I would have liked the story be carried through to an ending rather than just ending with the sex. Finding the daughter,bedding the daughter, resolving the blackmail, getting a good cheque from dad and then bedding mother and daughter together perhaps. Could have been better.
back to start
oooops. Just went back to the listings to see this is chapter one. I am looking forward to more.
great story!
looking forward to more!
And the best line is...
I always find a favorite line when I read your stories, Doctor. One that makes me want to knock on your skull and ask if your brain can come out and play.
---- Very attractive. I said, turning the picture over to see if there was some trick to how they made her tits look so real. ----
This one earned you a devil/kiss/dancing banana on my personal story merit scale. Thank you for the long-awaited sequel; the literary world needs more dicks like yours.
Style, Humor, Sex - the Lot
Great tale doc. in the 'gumshoe' tradition.
The story has a beautiful flow, nice balance of humor against plot line and, naturally, sex. You conjur some real imagery with economy of words, much to be admired. Thanks, look forward to 1.5 (this a new style - half chapters?)
Great Stuff
Gotta have more! This is a great series with lots of potential!!
Laughing hard
Such a fine piece of work.
Dr_M had caught the whole 'gumshoe' ouvre very nicely.
And the sex was very hot as well.
Whew!
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