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Good Start
You're right - your forte is westerns and I look forward to your stories. This looks like the beginning of another good submission - wish they were a bit longer though.
More please
You certainly excell with the westerns. Keep them coming.
THANK YOU........
Love everything you write, please continue your wonderful stories and thank you more
WELCOME BACK
you've been gone for 6 months or so...good to have you back...
Yeah for the Western
Your westerns are my favorite ones of the genre. Great to see a new story although I often re-read the old ones.
Easy. I fell in love with Emily when Jerimiah started negotiating the horse boarding with Jake.
Any woman with a son that smart and resourceful has got to be a woman to love, with a character so deep and genuine that it flows right out of her soul into her son's. That's beauty.
Now I will go back to reading from that point, but I know already this should be a story worth reading. Thank You.
And I'll let you know if otherwise.
I have to agree
You've found your niche! I wonder if any other time and place has offered men the freedom to grow and carve out a life like the American West did. Great character development! I already care about Jeremiah, Jake and Emily.
TUMBLEWEEDS ROLL ALONG THE PRARIES
leaving a trail in the dust, TK U MLJ LV NV
an intriguing and compelling story
thank you for writing
I agree with your self assessment, you have found your genre.
Of course
your Forte is Westerns. You write the best. Thanks and good to see you again.
But, 'glad to ride into El Paso.......' must have been desperate
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