A great chapter which I hope will become 10 or 12 more
Keep writing and drive the asshole of lit crazy. Dear annony we all know you love these stories. Eat shit and die asshole annony!
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Anonymous12/11/15
@bonniebitch aka vastiesmith2, you are the asshole of lit. You can't handle the truth and the truth is the stories you insist are worth 5* are actually worth minus scores only lit won't give us that option.
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Anonymous12/11/15
The only way to fairly evaluate this plot, is to reverse the genders.
Is it still the same story if its the wife ogling his friend's much larger cock? And hoping to get fucked by it? I think not.
..if you can't write what turns you on and share it with other readers without being attacked for it? It's fantasy. My fantasy may not even appeal to you in the slightest. It's been years since I posted here, and that was the primary reason I stopped. Too bad it's still hanging around. (BTW, I'd love to see Laura fully naked and relaxed!)
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Tantalising
Interesting start, looking forward to what follows.
Okay
Not worth commenting on. Not a story, just an episode. Don't bother writing more
A great chapter which I hope will become 10 or 12 more
Keep writing and drive the asshole of lit crazy. Dear annony we all know you love these stories. Eat shit and die asshole annony!
@bonniebitch aka vastiesmith2, you are the asshole of lit. You can't handle the truth and the truth is the stories you insist are worth 5* are actually worth minus scores only lit won't give us that option.
The only way to fairly evaluate this plot, is to reverse the genders.
Is it still the same story if its the wife ogling his friend's much larger cock? And hoping to get fucked by it? I think not.
Ok my interest is piqued.
Can I have Laura's number please?
But what is the point...
..if you can't write what turns you on and share it with other readers without being attacked for it? It's fantasy. My fantasy may not even appeal to you in the slightest. It's been years since I posted here, and that was the primary reason I stopped. Too bad it's still hanging around. (BTW, I'd love to see Laura fully naked and relaxed!)
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