You've Got Another Thing Coming

Great flash tale

I don't think it needs finishing. It stands as it is. Late in, early out and a twist in the tail. 5*

Not enough relatives and other critical characters

Read Vandemonium1's story "Onslaught" to see how to totally destroy a wife who is proposing that she should take another into the marital bed.

He brought in the full cast of interested characters and drove the wife mad.

BigK10 is a mere amateur by comparison.
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Great Flash Fiction!

Nice, quick, hard hitting piece with a good dose of common sense. I´m from a small town and can visualize everything! Well written!

Well Done

Short Sweet and well written. I enjoyed your story very much.

Good quick read

I did not see that coming! So thank you for a good story. Please do keep writing you got talent. Thank you for sharing your effort. I will keep reading!

LOL well done

Thank you. Wonderful little story.
NO sequel.

Fun story

Neat idea. Not sure the title fits. The phrase is "You've got another think coming"; Judas Priest used a play on words turning think to thing, but I'm not sure of the relevance here. Either way it was a good story.

Well done, sir.

How refreshing. A guy with a plan to keep things in line and not play the helpless wimp. Thanks for the read.

Perfect!

5 and a Fav thanks for sharing

Excellent Story

Just reading it was a pleasure and how to avoid prison was beautiful. But it is a bit worrisome that she was so jealous and respected no limits. Personally I would have filed immediately for divorce and then thought it over a bit.

Boring

'Flash story' is code for 'I'm too lazy to write a whole story, so please praise me for one scene with nothing interesting, sexy or clever in it.'

And I'm noticing it's not getting quite as high of ratings as some, probably because it's not the kind of violent snuff porn that this audience usually likes.

did u study

under neath JPB. reek of his unfinished influence.
2 stars 4 what should have been an excellent finished tale.

When you stick your foot in a pile of shit, you should pull it out. Most cucks will at least finish the story. Keep your day job.

A little over the top

But it is fantasy and that was entertaining. 3*

As Stangstar06

@Anon Here BigK10's autobiography and same to Stangstar06:

Over the last few months, I have unexpectedly found a "support group" that I was in need of--even if I didn't realize it! Yes, I was also the victim of my first wife's cheating ways. When it came to a head, I got drunk for 3 days, then slammed the door shut on that part of my life.

12/2/2015 - I've been having trouble getting submissions to go through. I've also had a lack of inspiration, hopefully that is over. We'll see. Hope you enjoy my latest, but not greatest! ;-)

Nowadays, I'm happily married to wife #2 for over 24 years, when I found this website. After reading my first 'loving' wife story, where she got caught & he got revenge, I felt a weight lifted from me. I read another...and another...you get the idea.

So, many thanks to these authors who helped me regain some self esteem and understand that it wasn't just me--that wifey #1 was just a selfish slut!

When I get a story idea, I just can't sleep until I get it written. So, I thought I'd share my twisted thoughts with the folks that helped me out (not that I expect to help others the same way I was!). I hope you enjoy my tales as much as I did while purging them from my tired brain. ;-) 10/29/10

Interesting against living happy new life with a newer women a lot of people feel angry forever for the first cheating wives!

Dear anon you are wrong, because that man is cuckold only who LIVES TOGETHER WITH AN EXTRAMARITAL SEX PRACTICE WIFE!

Liked it!
Would be nice with a chapter of her "pennance"
Thanks for the effort

When he gets a story idea he can't sleep until he gets it written? Then has he not slept in days, because this story isn't written yet.

No wonder he couldn't keep his wife if he stays up for days at a time just to write this kind of shit, she's definitely better off without him.

it's "another THINK coming"

if you're going to use an expression, at least get it right.

I know there's no violence in this story, I said that's why I'm noticing the anonymous cowards in this section don't seem to like it very much. Still not a finished story at all, and still indicative of a lazy author who just wants to be told again and again how great he is by the cesspool of shit that is living wives, and by idiots like you duna.

Amazed you like it without the wife being turned into a milking cow or whatever you're always on about.

I know it's a "flash story" I just also know that's lit, lw code for not actually wanting to word their own story but still wanting to be praised as some kind of genius for their unoriginal, half baked idea for one scene

I know you don't know anything about being praised for your stories, duna, but it's very easy here in lw if you just insult women, pander to the worst anons, and then doing spend half your story ranting in broken English about loving to drink underage girls' breast milk like you tended to do.

think, not thing

You've got another think coming.
It is another way of saying "Think again"

Would saying "Thing again" make any sense?

two-crows

Actually it's "thing", not think. Look on their website.

There is no point in arguing with you Duna if you're just going to copy/paste your past gibberish into each new argument where it doesn't apply. This isn't an argument about the definition of Loving Wives and how anonymous trolls and assholes like you have ruined it. It was a discussion of how this specific story is unfinished and feels lazy.

But please, lecture us all more about what is and isn't a fetish story and how lactation and pedophilia (like your stories used to have) and rape and murder belong here while wife sharing and cuckolding, the explicit purposes of this category per Laurel's own words on the subject, don't.

I gave it 5 stars ...

... It was a very enjoyable read! Many Thanks from the Panther fan.

AWESOME!!!

I didn't see it coming. 5*. No need for a sequel.

I can't believe it. I come back after all this time to see FLC still bleeting?

It may be, that this portal was originally intended for cucks and wife sharing, but you can get that crap anywhere, including here.
However, a strange culture developed in the Loving Wives site. A culture that is so much stronger thanthe one that FLC likes, and supports.
All you have to do, is look at the votes and the ratings to see that what I say is the truth. The much greater audience reject that crap outright. Look at ALL of the high ranking stories to see that what i say is true.

So even if it was the original intention for this to be a cuck and whore portal, the self-regulated form that it has taken is so much more palatable than the alternative, and obviously draws an audience... and that would be a much greater audience.

So FLC's criticizing yet another story where the man isn't a wimp and a loser? What a surprise!

As for his criticism's... it's a flash story, a short, no-depth representation of a single idea. It was never intended to be War And Peace.

And in that respect, BigK10's story is more than fine... it's fun, it's right, it's light, and only the bad guys got bitch-slapped. And it does it all in an efficient, tight little tail.

FLC I know you'll keep yapping on, but your ideas and ideals are far in the minority here, no matter how much you flap your trap. You have as much chance changing all of our minds, as we have of changing yours. So keep it up, ok?

No matter how much you bitch, you will always have a tonne of arguments against you, whether they are emotive, logical or moral responses, measured argument or even the ravings of the redneck fruitbats.

I do wish you'd give it up, but I know better than that. You bore me.

3*s

I thought this was very funny . Gave you 3*s .
It wasn't the violent porn snuff fantasy I really enjoy . And I like longer stories .
Thank you for the effort .
Does this mean we have to wait another year for the next piece you post ??


AMerryman

Think? Thing?

Wow, really?

That's what you all are arguing about?

Pretty funny, when the comments and stories here are full of fun little quircks like "looser" instead of "loser". You bunch of LOOSERS... as in, loose in the caboose.

Of course, different regions add different effects on writing as well... he was 'drug' up the hill instead of 'he was 'dragged' up the hill.

But hey, you idiots... this is an amateur writing site where the contributors are doing it for free... even maybe for fun.

Get over it. It's a fun little contribution.

Thanks, BigK10

I love when I bore someone and they're so far above bothering with me that they compose an essay about why they aren't going to bother arguing. Especially when it's the kind of anonymous little troll that sends me two or three feedback emails a day telling me to get raped or killed myself, because they care so little about me of course.

Laughter

The ending of this story actually made me laugh.

Like so many writers on here

none of you have any idea how the phrase you are trying to use is actually spoken nor, do you seem to care. The phrase is: "if that's what you think, you have another think coming". You have "another thing coming" doesn't make sense because it's used in relation to thinking, not stuff.

Could have been a good story. You scotched that with saying no sequel coming.

I can't believe the title is the biggest issue here!

The title here came from a song by the band Judas Priest. I heard the song on the radio and this story formed in my head. The title of the song is: "You've Got Another THING Comin'."
I find it interesting that most of those using "think" seem to be from the East side of the Atlantic, and that Judas Priest is a British band. If you don't believe me that it is indeed "thing," check out their 1982 album, "Screaming For Vengeance." Being the "antique" that I am, I still have it...on vinyl even.
I'm glad that some (hopefully most) of you readers found this amusing and possibly even funny, which was my intention--not to create a title controversy.
Hmmm...I hear a song in my head, and I think I'll go listen to it.
Enjoy Life
BigK

Pack Her Bags

Kick her ass out and get a D I V O R C E!

She Crossed WAY OVER the Line!

I have to say that the wife's determined intent to actually commit adultery in front of her husband was enough to qualify for divorce!!! She is insanely jealous and thinks that cheating is the way to pay him back. She'll just do it again sometime in the future and tell him after the fact. Kick her cheating heart to the curb!!!