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hot as hell
loved it so much... got me hard as a rock... blew my load all over my computer... had great sex with my "steve" after!!
Perfect Conclusion
The conclusion of this story was so well written you couldnt possibly be disapointed, it was so good amazing in fact I just loved it. Read anything by this author and you wont be sorry.
BEAUTIFUL
this story was sweet and interesting from the beginning to the end.
Perfect ending
It was really good!
Great choice of vocabulary; but most of all, it seems real, and I loved the ending :)
Well done!
This really was a wonderful story. As opposed to the majority of stories here on Literotica, it actually had substance. There was a bit of character development, and the sex wasn't the entire purpose of the writing. Thank you for writing a very sophisticated and appreciably detailed tale of love. =D
Lovley....
It was a great story and I loved how real it was. You have a way with words and I will be reading your works over and over ;) Fantastic. I wish you all the best!
a bit overdone but it brought me on quickly. I should be that lucky when I next stay at a hotel; theres one in Lisbon - but thats my story.........
Wow
I loved this. There's jst something about gay sex that gets me so turned on. Loved it. A lot.
good one
Beautiful
I love romantic stories and this is really one of my favourites
That was beautiful
Keep them coming
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