Technically We're Estranged Ch. 06

Wow

Why do you do this to me this is been one of the best stories I have read on the why do you do this to me this is been one of the best stories I have read on this site. I made an account just to favorite you one final thing to add fuck you for making me wait a week

great cocktail

Expecting this next week

Cliffhangers

If the next chapter is a flashback and avoids continuing from this cliffhanger, I will be upset.

this is not my normal genre

But I enjoyed your Font of Fertility series and thought I would try other works by you as well. TWE has been quite enjoyable both sensually and in getting my interest invested in the characters. Before you finish the series, I just wanted to say "very well done" and "thanks". Hopefully, you have ideas for other series, here or on ebooks, and continue to write.

Tease!

Now that is a hook and completely not fair! (Said with a smile on my face.)

Another great chapter.

Ugh

You're killing me smalls

What a Cliff Hanger

WOW. I could not believe that!! You have a great story going and I am dying to see how it all ends. This is incredible.

That was progressing so well....

But then you had to go and do that. You just gave us sampling, a taste before leaving us hanging and hungry for more. Starving as we were. Waiting for this chapter. A meager snack and left to starve until the next. I hope I can make it.

Excellent work by the way. 5.

Like you didn't expect that!

I am really liking this story, I have enjoyed all of BtB's works so far.

And to all of you who are upset about this chapter's ending, I have to ask; did you *really* expect anything different?
Really?

Nice story BtB, Looking forward to the next chapter!

wow

once again you got us !

An absolutely perfect tease ...

I loved it!

OK..Now the ending

Here is the problem. No matter how you end the story, some people will
HATE the ENDING.
We like both women and one will be hurt.
I am looking forward to your choice of endings. Good Luck

More

Please do not end the story with just the next chapter. If you have to continue it under a different story name. However, a threesome with Bella and Mel in Australia and Mel still doing her webcam girl thing would be a great new story, especially with the law enforcement and mob angle which would make for an awesome continuing series.

For inspiration read stories like "The Morrisons" by RecHiker, "A New Life for Dr. Mitchel" by Fat_Dad, "My Only Talent" by Conanthe, and The various Iron Crowbar series by WifeWatchman. All are authors on Literotica.

Buildup

Hahaha. Typical of you to keep us on the edge of our seats. I'm loving this story and looking forward to the outcome. There could be so many different conclusions!
Keep up the good work.

Brilliant cliffhanger. So eager for the next chapter. If it doesn't work out for our hero, please consider a spin off series with the secretary. I see so many possibilities there with her.

5 stars.

Asshole! lol. kidding...

yeah, kidding, but damn it that was an asshole move with the cliffhanger you evil evil person... okay, I'm going to stop before I break out into a laughing fit; so far your story has been a very fun and interesting ride, and I love the dynamics you have going. I simply can't wait for the rest of it to be posted so I can read it.

I can't believe you did that.

Interesting story so far though. I read them all in one go. I can't wait for the next one.

Also...

This story is too interesting to end it so soon. Unless the final chapter ends up being more than two pages worth. There's still a ton more that you could add to it.

Predictable

I'm glad you are continuing the great tradition of literotica authors failing to complete multi part stories.

Someone

Yes, Yes please continue the story!!! I am enjoying and you can't leave us hanging!!

where is the next chapter?

Lots of us are waiting for the next chapter, you said one week and it's been almost 3. Please don't leave us hanging here. We need to know what happens. Please,please,please.

Please continue!!!!!!!

We are still waiting for the next episode :P Its too good of a story to be left in the middle.

Dont stop

Great little story so far but please keep going. Im really hoping your just been enjoying your Xmas break and havent had time.

First comment of 2016

Well... Please... Please just post the next one!

Next week...

My ass!

Great story

I love all your stories.

well...

A friend suggested this to me, and I've read all 6 chapters. I can not WAIT to see her response, I hope it's amazing. Thank you!

Well written.

Well written and interesting story. It's a shame though that it doesn't seem like we will be seeing the end chapter anytime soon if we ever see it at all.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Had to be done since the next chapter isn't out yet.

Really now

To go radio silent one chapter before the end, is fucking sad. Been checking in every week, but looks like this will be the graveyard for this series. For what it's worth I loved your work...

Good example

This is a perfect example of why you don't end on a cliffhanger and put in a-hole statements to your readers unless you are already done with the next chapter. You end up looking like a first class ass.

Get to it.

You gave us your word. You're way late! Let's get cracking. Chapter 7 is overdue and we need to see this play out. Don't be that guy.

Finish this or someone else will

Come on Dude

Curious / Theory

Was wondering, those that joined his mailing list, have you received any info?
Also, on his bio it says last modified was on Dec 12, 2015; so who knows maybe something happened to him a few days before posting the last chapter?
Lastly from what his bio stated, he had/has other stories he was planning to release, so I kinda doubt he just up and left. So maybe something did happen to him? o.O

Guess we won't know until later and I suppose we'll have to wait, but I feel the sentiment of others in hoping its not some dick move to wait longer then needed or if he never finished it before posting about releasing it without exactly being done or mostly done with it either.

Anon's Calm Down

Guys, it was the holiday season. People who joined his mailing list were informed that things had become hectic for him during this holiday season. He is still working on his writings when he can. Remember, this is a FREE to use site. He doesn't earn anything writing here except a better understanding of how to write. He just needs more time than he anticipated.

OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD

AWESOME!!!

Please keep posting

I can't tell you how many times I've checked your profile in the past weeks hoping to see an update. I have truly enjoyed your past work and hope you will keep posting.

Impatiently and anxiously waiting

Lol, I read that it has been hectic, but wow, you are seriously leaving us hanging here Lol. Hope that things are slowing down and all is well.

nice

@J_Reader_Comics i agree, it was the holidays and maybe he has stuff to do but he is an asshole! He left us with a freaking huge cliffhanger here, and im pretty sure thats the reason everyone is commenting when will he post the next one :)

~ Ari

Cliff hanger...ugh!

Will Batman and Robin escape the evil clutches of the Riddler....Find out next week, same Bat-time, same Bat-Channel...God I hated that when I was a kid and I am only slighter better as an adult when it comes to waiting for a cliff hanger.

Alas, we understand priorities, BtB has a real life and it is interfering with his writing life. I completely understand and will shuffle along waiting for the next chapter.

It is a great read! Keep up the great story telling!

@Ari

Completely agree with that sentiment. I keep checking back almost daily just to see if he updated his profile to say he has submitted it. What a damn cliffhanger to end it on though.

@J_Reader_Comics

yeap! it was HUGE! i'd say we push literotica to have monthly Oscars for the ASSHOLIEST© (what? u dont like my new found words? i love it! patent pending!!) MOVE! he definitely earn dat -.-!

P.S. We love you BreakTheBar but dude you are KILLING us!

~ Ari

Not cool

Mate you said next week, ive checking back daily for 7 weeks. Not cool considering the bastard cliffhaner you left on
I understand real life is a thing and truely hope yours is well, but you've created a little slice of fantasy in my mind thats been on hold for far too long, please have mercy on us lol

Of course he has a life

No one begrudges him a life and of course stuff happens, but how it was written I think is the problem. He basically taunted his own readers and ended in a very a-hole manner. That's a fine choice to do if you really do have the next chapter done and ready to submit as he said, but it's a dick move when you lie to your readers and aren't ready to deliver.

Seriously where is the next chapter?

You need to finish this

Oh well shit happens!

He may have had something come up or his story didn't need an ending he seems to have ended his other stuff with me wanting more. So why not an ending that wasn't we can sit an complain or find another story at least only a few have seen fit to comment. So da da ta da da ta, you know what comes next on that at least!

@wht1fethr

nah. he said that there will be a final chapter! so this will have an ending@ thats why we are waiting.

8 Weeks and counting

Well, I have had a chance to re-read this story once more. Still hooked. Starting to hope the author wasn't involved in some tragic accident over the holidays. Keep up the good work.

re: 8 weeks and counting

Last email I received from BreakTheBar was on Jan 26th, so not so long ago. Unfortunately for us, he wrote that his work at the moment interferes with his writing and he will send a heads up to people on his mailing list when "soon approaches"... which he hasn't yet, so we are still in for some more waiting...

Still no update

Here's hoping it happens eventually.