All Comments on 'A Trial in Vennington'

You mocked the GamerGate/Twitter feminist debate here a lot better than you did in "Safe Sex." I get that with those succubi being servants of Annette it's gotta be pretty fucked up no matter how you look at it, but the resolution to this story is also more surprising and well written, not only "justifiable," I guess. Bravo!

I found it quite a good read (as per usual with your material), if we could get a continuation that would be great.

The best of luck, later.

If it wasn't for the terrible one sided posturing about gamer gate and those men hating feminists this would be a good story. I liked your sneaky Succubus

If you look at hydra's blog, Many Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello, it's a wonder he doesn't get political more often in his stories. I don't really agree with him often either but it's part of the art. Only when it dominates the entire story is it a problem.

This is your best story yet.

I think this is on par with his other stories. It just has an unexpected twist.

I'd love to read a longer story, though. Something the size of an average book. These shorts are only enough to whet one's appetite, unfortunately.

The Succubus must be Nÿte. Everything about Her screams Nÿte, especially her mischievious remark to the poor man in the end.

It's Nÿte, even if she isn't explicitly named. This story was also posted on his blog and was tagged with Nÿte.

You did a good job of showing the people who are involved with #gamergate that aren't sexist assholes, plus it was hilarious and surprising! THIS is exactly what expect from the best Succubu writer around. Much improved from your other recent works too! Not that they Were bad just not as good

Really... creepy feminists descrition. And not dark as ending as usual. Would love to see a sequel - whtther she will take Gary to the same realm where Phil is...

Not being a gamer I am sure I missed most of the allusions, but I understood that an 'innocent' man was going to die. Thank you for your eleventh hour unfolding of (un)natural justice.

Not a category that I'd generally read much of, but for some reason, it caught my interest. And well worth the effort, too!! Got me hooked and reeled me in early on, and held until the wonderfully unexpected end. Well written, and excellently delivered.

SV.

Nyte would have kiled the guy anyway and then kill her primary target.

i love your stories mate!! keep them cumming :)

I generally read your stuff, this was rather good. Thanks.

Love it. I'd like to see more chapters if possible thank you for sharing it with us...

I have been reading your stories for years. YOU ARE AMAZING!!!! However, i'm with the others, this story bears finishing. It is a total tease!

Perfectly written character wise, hot as hell in general, and to cap it off a brilliant cliff-hanger ending. Hope to see more soon.

Abso-fucking-lutely brilliant. I'm glad he didn't die in this tale (yet?), and how you mocked those femcunt shitlords for their totalitarian system is hilarious.

This was a "Be careful what you ask for" story, but from a tertiary point-of-view. Simply brilliant.

I adore good dialogue, including inner dialogue, and you excel at it. Mmmm, please keep writing.

The virtuous right winger beset by terrible left-wing strawmen. The sjw you rail against do not exist. You have to admit white males in our society have had many advantages over the last few centuries.. But then again extremists of any stripe are dangerous. But in reality the only ones that are actually dangerous tend to be like those idiots in Oregon or religious nutjobs like those in Isis and the like.

"One looked an obvious radical student feminist—right down to her bright red hair and horn-rimmed spectacles." WTF does that even mean? 1) what does it mean to look like a radical feminist? What do you mean by radical feminist? You do understand rad fems are only one kind of feminist? And that feminist simply means you believe women should be treated equally? Oh, heavens no! That's so evil and diabolical! But let's go back to the quote. Only rad fems dye their hair bright red and wear horn-rimmed spectacles? Bwahahahahaha! Enjoy your paranoia!

Love the plot twist. I was way wraped up in it. What a great imagination. Good use of Nyte (even though you didn't name her). Keep going please!

This story is made of win and awesome.

Such excellent use of 4chan memes!

It's obvious that you doesn't afraid of anything.

I rather thought she might not kill him - after all, he was innocent of the crime she was summoned to deal with. Interesting how one of the group was a misogynistic asshole, though.

Of all the stuff on Literotica, yours is what I look forward to.

Excellently thought out and put to paper.

Always fun.

Keep it up! (No pun intended...because with your inclinations, keeping it up would simply be an invitation for a succubus to drain it...lol)

And delicious irony, that all these wackos have managed to do is get their "victim" laid. Meanwhile, the real prick got punished as he deserved. Goes to show that supernatural creatures don't give a shit about human perceptions and beliefs. They have principles of their own.

Plus, as my own stories have demonstrated lately, I've really been into succubi of late. Succubi and vampires.

As we'd say in my native state of California, "Duuuuuuuude, right on!"

Well done. Great twist.

Yes Nyte for the win!!!

Abrupt place to stop. Just from one sentence to the next, it really could use an ending.

Or a few chapters more to flesh it out, there's a lot of unfinished questions.

Did Gary just gain an ally here, and what's gonna happen to the other SJWs? How would a world with demonology practised in secret differ from ours?

Who hurt you, manyeyedhydra? The sex was hot as always but everything surrounding it was pure awful.