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A sad day for loving wives
Not even sure she's his wife. Story doesn't say so. If she is, no wonder they both have ex spouses.
Yeah, have to agree with you anon
Problem is they're too many sad days in loving wives. Over 90% of stories posted daily are nothing but trash, dug out of a festering sewer. No wonder so many readers are spewing negative comments and give out tons of low scores. Where oh, where did all the good writers go? Most likely don't want to be associated with the sicko cuckies that fester in this category and the flaming comments made by their followers.
You're right, previous anonymous commenter, that's why adding a "Mental Illness" category would improve site usability tremendously.
re: If there was a comment catorory for "Mental Illness"
Wrote the "person" who posted an anonymous comment slamming (wait for it) annony.
Anonymous who gave this a five
is none other than vastiesmith2/bonnietaylor2 the official "FLAMMER" of loving wives. She always gives five star scores no matter how sick the story. Now how sick is that? She is one of the followers of the sewer rats who post 90% of the stories in this category. Anon is right, these authors don't realize how many one star votes they get just because of her comments. Payback is hell bonnietaylor. Take heed.
Yet another 'follower' just following all the other 1* garbage writers in this category, why not be different to the majority?
Good short story
It wasn't his wife and there was no erotic sex but I gave it 5 stars to help offset the low scores of the dumbass anons who hate anyone having sex in 'Loving Wives'.
So his fantasy was to have a threesome with another man?
Funny but don't most guys think about a threesome with another woman as the third person? Was he Bi? Were they married? This was a train wreck of unexplained proportions. 1 star.
Great short story
I really liked the setup. You could continue the plot and bring in the other three guys for a really interesting weekend!
not enough
Why'd he ask Joe to leave at the end? He should have gotten Joe to fuck her.
cute start - keep it going
no fun unless you're both sober enough to know and enjoy what's happening. The rest of the guys need to visit your campsite, Kim will want it. xoxoxoxo Annette
missunderstood category
All too often it seems that the "Loving wives" category is misunderstood as it relates to literotica.
http://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-break-the-lit erotica-toplist
Conversation?
Sharing your wife with another man or men works best if there is a deep understanding between the two of you. Please continue your story and tell us all about the conversations they have in the morning. These conversations may lead to additional adventures with the other three guys ( I hope!), or the conversations may bring to an end the adventures on this particular camping trip (that would be sad). Either way, I would love to hear the rest of the story, focusing on the conversations the morning after.
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