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Excellent Mind Game
This is one of the best mind game stories I have read. It is subtle and well developed. I can't wait for part 2.
Gteat Start - Give Me More!!!
Wow! What a great start! I can't wait to read more. Your writing makes me strain for the relief that Sara needs so much. Is her husband a part of this conspiracy? What has led hed maid to be a part of this plot.
I felt sko helpless as I watched Sara's plight. I can't wait for both of us to get some relief!
Please write more soon.
Awesome
Awesome! Please continue the story! I hope you're just getting started with this one :)
Outstanding writing!
W on't write any more, need to get to next chapter.
Well rounded...
Everything in this beginning of a story is well-rounded. This is a very good introduction, as it is enticing, and makes you read only more and more. Well done.
Moonharp
P.S. - the actual writing was very good, as well.
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