This was s very sexy story, and reminded me a lot of my first time. The only problem I saw was the word "womb," I think its just too heavy with baggage for such a sweet seductive scene. Great work though overall and great cock descriptions.
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Anonymous12/15/15
Nice, but need the payoff
A nice, sensual story. However, it would have been all the better if there was some mention or hint of Darci becoming pregnant.
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Very sexy story
This was s very sexy story, and reminded me a lot of my first time. The only problem I saw was the word "womb," I think its just too heavy with baggage for such a sweet seductive scene. Great work though overall and great cock descriptions.
Nice, but need the payoff
A nice, sensual story. However, it would have been all the better if there was some mention or hint of Darci becoming pregnant.
Excellent
Excellent story, thank you. Please write more.
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