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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/19/04

Hitting your thumb with the hammer

Often you hit the nail on the head, but sometimes you miss and put a hole in the wall - leaving nothing but exceptionally florid language.

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by jthserra01/20/04

Some interesting wordplay

I loved the wordplay, but think I missed the message. To read it aloud is a joy.

jim :)

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by LeBroz12/25/06

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Last two strophes are just great!

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by duddle14601/27/07

intimacy

The Gods smiled upon me ~ I pursued you ~ success.

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