All Comments on 'Dream within a Dream Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So it was good...

But where was the backstory with Bettina? I don't recall her ever fucking our "hero" before, and there was no real setup/buildup for it. It was a hot scene, but it would have been better with more of a setup.

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanover 8 years agoAuthor
Bettina

Don and Bettina have banged before ("Dark Side of the Force Ch. 3" is one story). I agree that it could have and should have been built up more, as well as leading in to Nick and Laura some more. Thanks for the input; it helps me write better stories.

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