Mom's Only Choice

sounds real good another chapter sounds good too

I liked the story. Mom/son fucking and Dad being cuckcolded is so fucking hot. That being said, I wish the story could have been longer. A second chapter, please.

What no oral?

My only issue was no licking or sucking. I would love to taste mommy. ****

Hot

Wouldn't it be a kick in the father's head if the son got mom pregnant.

Mmm,

I really enjoyed the mom-son sex part, this sentence especially is why I like the story so much "And the answer was pretty easy. Why, it had to be the person in the world I love the most."

But, IMO, and this if of course only my opinion, I do wish the dad had either been out of the picture (maybe the mom-son could have been recording this for his cheating ass), or he had been such a huge doucebag that you felt only contempt for him. Right now, after reading this story, I only felt sorry and a bit of pity for him.

Thanks for writing.

Excellent Story...

... and it could definitely use another chapter of uninhibited sex between executive mother and her son... some oral... possibly some anal.... Well done.

Marginal…

I suppose, in the strictest sense of the word, this passes as erotica but, really…this is nothing more than meaningless pornography.

This story has just begun..

You definitely have to follow this up with a sequel. There's so many ways you can go with this story and you left some unanswered questions. What was sons relationship with his Dad like . If it was good, revenge for the father or if it was bad well do whatever with him.To me , his fathers last words to his son sounded just like that, his last. The sadness and humiliation to much for him did he indeed do himself in or did he continue on being the little sub to his wife. What did the son do after fucking the shit out of his executive dominating mum , cum to his senses or did he turn it around and dominant the mum. Which ever way you go with this ....... FINISH IT

short

Sorry, just too short for me. It is fairly well written as it was real easy to follow the 'plot'. Can you take longer in the build up provide some teases before the wambam. Or perhaps I feel more cofortable with a tear jerker than a meat jerker.
4star for your efforts.

Solid smut

It's not a multi chapter epic, but sometimes that isn't what you are looking for in a story. Keep up the good work!

Lmaoooooo

No dad on the planet in the history of mankind would've said "just treat her better than I did" after all of that but otherwise the story was nice.

Story

A good start but needs a good story to rap around the sex.

Nice mom son story

Short but nice mom son story. You have more potential to write. Expecting nice and long mom son tension filled romantic story with strong build of characters, base of story.

Well wishes for your upcoming many more mom-son stories.

Somewhat abrupt!

I kind of agree with those who feel it was too short, but it was good anyway. The kid's recovery cycle was also amazingly short but it's fantasy and thereby acceptable.

Please keep writing.

Dad gives the green light to Jake.

Good story! I wonder if Desmond cheated only once, or was it more? There may be additional pay backing yet to be done by Jake? I doubt Desmond did the nasty with whoever it was on a table? I would want a bed, and a little privacy, maybe even a motel. If it's got to be done, you might as well take advantage and enjoy it as much as possible.

It's **

A read.

That's it?

Where's the rest of the story? This is just the beginning. Where's the rest of the story?