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by Maria239401/19/04

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this just feels so sad...I think I know pip from another life

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by Angeline01/19/04

The great expectations

are generally the unmet ones, but love is real and sometimes
the good things that happen in the tiniest increments are best. Wot larks, Pip. :)

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by jthserra01/20/04

Very nice...

I liked the off beat phrasing here, it fit the feeling perfectly. I also enjoyed the "stage directions" (the pause and pause again)... reminded me of Vachel Lindsay. Excellent poems.

jim :)

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