This played to me on so many levels, and made me think about my own older brother. I really, truly enjoyed this. Please keep writing!
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Anonymous12/09/15
truly intimate and sexy
i adored this. the passion between them was palpable, and the sense of excited romance was extra arousing to me personally, a refreshing change from the more animalistic, cheesy stuff.
It was definitely shorter than I wanted, but I read the first installment and enjoyed that as well. Please keep going!
The author perfectly captured lust, love and commitment. Congratulations.
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Anonymous12/09/15
So damn hot!
What can I say its sexy, hot, and erotic! Great short story! :-)
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Anonymous12/09/15
Short but hot and to the point
Not much to add but a wish for more in the series!
5* of course!
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Anonymous12/10/15
Awesome
I truly loved this. More powerful and punchy than some of the cheesy taboo stories I see here. I agree, I wish it were longer, but this was a strong little vignette that got me going.
English
Top notch!
This played to me on so many levels, and made me think about my own older brother. I really, truly enjoyed this. Please keep writing!
truly intimate and sexy
i adored this. the passion between them was palpable, and the sense of excited romance was extra arousing to me personally, a refreshing change from the more animalistic, cheesy stuff.
It was definitely shorter than I wanted, but I read the first installment and enjoyed that as well. Please keep going!
Extraordinarily real.
The author perfectly captured lust, love and commitment. Congratulations.
So damn hot!
What can I say its sexy, hot, and erotic! Great short story! :-)
Short but hot and to the point
Not much to add but a wish for more in the series!
5* of course!
Awesome
I truly loved this. More powerful and punchy than some of the cheesy taboo stories I see here. I agree, I wish it were longer, but this was a strong little vignette that got me going.
Awesome!
Such an awesome story! It was so beautiful and really hot. Good work! :)
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