A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 02 Ch. 18

Great story

I always smile when I see a new chapter of this story. Keep writing!

Ditto

I, too, smile when I see/read a new chapter. I am very much enjoying Gwen's journey. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.

Keep going

Every time i check literotica i am looking for your stories. I wish there were movies like this in stead of the quickies we get. Thanks. Keep it up.

Good

Always happy to see a new installment
Thank you

awesome story!!!

The stories just keep getting hotter and hotter. Worst part now is waiting until the next one :( lol!

Excellent chapter. Hot women all over the place. It's my favorite sexy soap opera. :-)

Great story

I always enjoyed all the episodes but the worst part is waiting nearly 2months for the next episode. Please post them with less time interval

A notch above

These are the classiest and sexiest stories I've ever read on this site. Keep this going and never stop, PLEASE!

Delighted Applause

Your writing continues to be above excellent, exciting arousing with all the pleasures and fantasies and delicious descriptions that make very hot enjoyable reading. I hope you never stop, always leaving a wonderful tease at the end, never too much tease.
Thank you and your fantastic creative imagination. I still think Gwen an Natalie should have some shoe store fun!!

Outstanding

These instalments are the best thing on the site each month. I especially enjoyed the way the Natalie / Gwen scene was written in this episode. Exquisite! Please keep up the good work.

great story

When are you going to write the next part I am Soo loving this. Never read any continuation stories like this

another great story from the best erotic series

First I should say that this series are the best erotic stories I have ever red. the resemblance to reality is at highest and that is the magic of it.
I have a few suggestions or should I say what I like to see in the future chapters.
1- I am looking forward to the mentioned trip with Natalie and Adam. I hope this trip gets as much details as possible and not wrapped in just one chapter. I cant wait to see how Gwen feels about being nude in front of his brother. How Tim, Natalie and Adam feel about their experiences in that trip either. I hope to see that you explore their inner thoughts and emotions thoroughly.
2- I like too see that Ali and/or KD find out about their mother special relation with their aunt and see what their reaction and thoughts would be.
3- I hope to see that Tim and Gwen start speaking openly about their desires and fantasies. Because it was just small talks till now and it seems that they have a lot to talk about.
4-In one of the chapters Gwen mentioned dirty talking, but it never happened. I think it would be very interesting to see Gwen dirty talking with Tim, or vise versa.
5- I think it would be very erotic if Tim encourages Gwen to do some naughty flashing in public in his presence.

One again, Thanks for the great job. Keep it going

Most Excellent

Enjoyed your comments, as always Top Notch story.

Loving request

I'm writing this, not having read past this chapter yet. I would love to see Gwen start thinking of Tim more, and deciding that if she gets to have fun with Nat, Tim should get a chance to explore without repurcussions. Once she decides this, it would be amazing if she is somehow able to convince Cricket to have a 3 some with Gwen and Tim.