All Comments on 'Chinese Christmas'

by GoldenCojones

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mambrkemambrkeover 8 years ago
Why?

"Feliciti smiled. It was a sad smile." Why a sad smile? Oh, by the way, great story - again. Love it. Goes to my favorites for sure.

gmann57gmann57over 8 years ago

I hope that there's more coming Great story, I kinda want to see Feliciti's plan backfire

techreadertechreaderover 8 years ago
Outstanding Story!

GREAT story. Keep writing.

GoldenCojonesGoldenCojonesover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks mambrke

First of all thank you for the wonderful comment. As to your question. Well since you had to ask then I didn't do a good enough job setting up the ending. I'll try to do better in my next story.

Feliciti is worried that Janna will steal Ramone away from her. It is the first time she has worried about losing him and it makes her sad. Her worry is unfounded, but still it is there

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

What has this to do with anything Chinese? You clearly know nothing about China or its culture.

GoldenCojonesGoldenCojonesover 8 years agoAuthor
Chinese Christmas Game

"What has this to do with anything Chinese? You clearly know nothing about China or its culture."

The story has nothing at all to do about China. It is about a "Chinese Christmas" party. In America, a "Chinese Christmas" is a party where people open random gifts and have the opportunity to take another players gift, allowing that person to open a new gift. Google "Chinese Christmas Game"

Sorry it didn't hit your kink, but not every story will.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I ENJOYED IT AND OTHER'S DID TOO

I fived starred your work. It is a fine slut wife story.

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Sad just sad

There is always something lost when you share partners, it's just human nature.

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